I should tell you.. I came to this story completely on accident. I'm on my iPod right now and clicked the 'random story' button by mistake :p
But then I saw it was snape/lily so I had to check it out because it's one of my favorite pairings. It was such a sweet idea to give lily and snape one final moment, and with the use of the 'always'-- except this time lily saying it to Severus-- was very moving.
Even though lily didn't recriporcrate the feelings Snape had it was good to see them have some sort of established peace in her final moment;
I thought this was very heartwarming! Good job with it, I'm glad I accidentally read it!! :) Report Review
This is so sad but so incredibly good! It was a bit short but it was so sweet and i love the entire thing!Author's Response: thanks! I know it's short but i just wanted to get something up to get me started. I have some things in the works so stay tuned. Thanks for the review Report Review
That was really beautifully written. Aside from a few grammar/punctuation mistakes, I really, really enjoyed reading it and it sparked a lot of emotion inside me. ;D Great job. I loved the last part too, it was very well-written. I see a lot of potential in your writing. I would love to read more from you!
Also... well, if you wouldn't mind, could you R&R my ff "Darkest Night"? It's a Dramione, and I don't know if you're interested in that, but if you are, then I would really appreciate it! Thank you! keep writing, you're awesome ~ flufff 8/10Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate hearing that. I have some other stories in the works but I still have some tweeking to do. I would love to read your story and review it. I will get right on that. Looking foward to it Report Review
It would be nice to think that Severus and Lilly saw each other one last time, wouldn't it?! Snape is also my favorite character, and I have written a story about him as well...maybe you could read/review it??!!Author's Response: It's sweet to imagine i agree. I would love to read your story. I will definately look for it and read it. Thanks so much for the input Report Review
Those weren't Lily Potter's last words. Her last words were "not Harry!,"
Snape was the reason she died.Author's Response: Actually the Potters died because they put their faith in the wrong person Peter Petigrew who admitted in the 3rd book that he was the one who turned them in to the dark lord Snape wanted to keep her safe. Thanks for the review and I did mention keeping Harry safe in my story and I just thought this would be a cute interpretation of what i see. Report Review
Snape from start to finish is possibly my most favourite character. The love Snape had for Lily was beautiful, just like this short story! I really liked this! Well Done :-)Author's Response: Thank you! I love Snape too. I love that he never stopped loving Lily it's just so romantic Report Review
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