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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Emma Chapter 1

13th December 2011:
I think the story is really good. I hope that you will write more chapters and that you not are giving up, cause I want to know what is going to happend? How will James react when he sees Harry?

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Review #2, by NaidatheRavenclaw Chapter 1

6th August 2011:
I think your story has a lot of potential. It shows that you have a creative mind and you can definitely come up with some good ideas for fanfiction. You can write, and the idea behind this was unique, which was great. You also did a great job of portaying the voice of a young Harry.
My biggest problem with this was the spelling and grammar issues. It made it hard to read, because I had to keep pausing when those arose. But that should be easy to clear up with a tad bit of proofreading, or you could go over to the forums and request a beta reader!
Really though, tons of potential. Just keep writing!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

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