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Review #1, by maskedmuggle Four Great Ones

7th August 2011:
Really interesting story, and a very original plot idea! I like the idea of the 'four great ones' and Scorpius being the seer! Usually people make it one of the trio's children instead. I love the uniqueness of this name: Veaux. I also liked how you changed the professors for most of the subjects, which made it more realistic. Quite a few people keep it the same as Harry's teachers, which is a bit of an irk of mine because it's unrealistic.

Nice writing! The only thing I thought you could have done more is perhaps making the dream more dreamlike.. Other than that, very nice story!

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

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