Hello! So, I think that the actual plot idea for this fic is really good, it's quite interesting and you could take the story pretty much anywhere. What I would say about it though, is that maybe you should ask for a beta - someone who could read through your chapters before you send them in for validating and point out errors and things that you could make better - at the forums. I really like the idea of this and I think that it could be really good if you had a beta going over it! I hope that it doesn't offend you or anything, because I'm only trying to be helpful :) Report Review
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