Bleach? I haven't read it, but my friends all have, and I most certainly have heard of it. I think this is a very interesting idea for a fic! I like all the Japanese in it, since I love Japan and its culture, and I'm learning Jap too. You introduced all the characters well, and I liked the letter from Carolin! It was great to hear about Hermione and to hear that she's clever! I think you're writing is great! I'm just very curious and interested to see where you take this story! Keep on writing! - maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You should check out Bleach if you can, because... there are a lot of good things about it that I really can't expound upon here. As for the Japanese, I am trying to balance out how much I use. The first fanfic I wrote using Japanese, I was told I used to much and didn't need to use so much. As for the next chapter, I am waiting for a one-shot I wrote to get posted and I am rewriting the next one-shot so that it is five-hundred words. So, I hope to have the next up soon. Report Review
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