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Review #1, by #1 Prisoner of Azkaban one of one.

31st March 2012:
I like this fic, and thought it was perfect! Exept for this one little part where you wrote, and I quote, "where Voldemort and Ginny sat, cuddling quite comfortably together, mumbling sweet nothings in each other's ears." Now I can only hope that it was ment to be "where Harry and Ginny sat, cuddling quite comfortably together, mumbling sweet nothings in each other's ears."

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Review #2, by Milin di An one of one.

11th August 2011:
Very vivid narration.
I could see the smile, feel the relaxation and the need to run up the stairs to hold her in my arms and the exhilaration of the honey tasting kiss.
Very nice chapter

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Review #3, by LovlyRita one of one.

9th August 2011:
This was so adorable and sweet! It's perfectly canon, and absolutely portrays the way that Ron probably thought about things. I love the way that he says she's beautiful, and her nonchalant response. It was done so perfectly. And the descriptions were very well done, you could feel Ron's annoyance with all the lovey dovey stuff, and his pleasure when Hermione kissed him.

I also love the description of the honey lip balm.

The story is very simple but it's very well done, and a charming, brief glimpse into their world. nice work!

LovlyRita ~Slytherin

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Review #4, by xtinjsc one of one.

8th August 2011:
Some of the imagery you presented here were very vivid and beautiful. I didn't have trouble imagining them in my head. And you've done a really good job with capturing the sweetness and the simplicity of the moment between Ron and Hermione. It wasn't over-the-top and that's what I liked most about this.

I did wonder what they were doing in Bill and Fleur's cottage at the time. But the contrast that the story provided between the two relationships was quite nifty. Bill and Fleur's romance was more intense, more out there while Ron and Hermione's were the quiet, innocent and subtle kind. Very nice.

You're writing is fantastic. Keep it up!

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

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Review #5, by Lal one of one.

2nd August 2011:
really gushy perhaps less of the gushyness and more of a nonchalant feeling from Ron?

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Review #6, by Good Job one of one.

2nd August 2011:
for a one chapter story it was better than i thought it would be, pleasantly surprising. Well done.

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