cool idea for the storyline. i have always loved fren and george in fanfics!!! and you have definately done a good job of freds personality. keep going!!! Report Review
I like the plot. It's a good story so far. Just a couple spelling and grammer errors. Oh nd if u added contractions the story wuold flow more easily i think. Report Review
Ooh, I really, really like the idea of this! So, mind-reading isn't completely original, but I love how the person who can mind-read is also a quiet, nobody notices her person! That really makes your story quite unique, and then add in the awesome twins and I'm hooked!
I really liked that Roxanne has a crush on Fred, I think it's cute. It'd be really interesting to read what happens next, so keep writing and update!
- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)Author's Response: Thank u so much. I have chap 2 waitin for validation, and ur review makes me want to write more. So this week I will get down on chp 3!! Report Review
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