Loved it! I don't usually like tragic tales, but this one is awesome. I kept rooting for Rose to ditch Scorpius, but I guess that is my Hufflepuff side speaking up. Loved the ending, seeing that Scorpius loved her after all and risked his life to avenge her death.
Awesome story. I think it's one of the top 3 I ever read in this site. (y) Report Review
The ending was depressing, I won't lie.
But I'm happy, you know? Scorpius truly loved Rose, and she died on her own terms. You must have spent ages perfecting it, because the entire story is incredibly polished. Nothing is left out, I don't think.
Also, the ending was sweet. He avenged Rose's death and they were finally together; both grown up enough to not be idiotic about their relationship like at the begining.
Ohhkaaay. This review is very unlike me. I'm normally all sunshine and rainbows, oh wait I've got to go feed my pet unilion! But it's 2:30am right now, so sorry if I've bored you to death.
Please wait for me on the other side, like Rose did for Scorpius. Actually don't that'd be creeepy.
ByyyeeeAuthor's Response: i feel like this review was written by that real life person that i trusted not to read this story... if that makes sense. if that's not the case then thanks for the review! ^^ Report Review
I have so many sad feels right now.Author's Response: Uh, thanks... I guess... :) Report Review
I simply love this story! I have to tell you, I'm getting so sick of "happy endings" I like tragedy. Tragedy is real, it makes you think. Even though it they were together in the end. (which I LOVE how it ended) It was still tragic. Thank you for such a great read! I hope you write more!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, I couldn't bare to give them a completely sad ending, but at the same time, I didn't really want to give it a happy ending, as the situation wasn't really appropriate for a happy ending. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks. :) Report Review
well quite frankly Rose DESERVED IT!Author's Response: Really?! Interesting to know that you feel like that! Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
Thank you now I hate Slytherin more! they're all EVILAuthor's Response: Ahh, well I wouldn't say that... Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
Well, it was a pretty good story. I have to say that even if I like the Slytherin House and being bad and those things, I hate what Rose had became and I am glad she didn't kill Harry... It was a pretty confusing/ shocking story, However, the last scene brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for writing this :) . It gave me lots to think about :).Author's Response: Thankyou for a wonderful review! Glad you liked it! Sorry for making you cry/being confusing. :D Thankyou for all of the lovely reviews! :) Report Review
I love the way Scorpius is. It's just so.. Scorpius xD. However, I am really enjoying this storyAuthor's Response: Thanks! Glad you like the characterisation! :D Report Review
It's lovely :) Rose is really nice, and Scorpius is really nice too, because he send her a present. :) Can't way to see what will happen xDAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked the characterisation, though I'm a little worried that you'll dislike the later chapters... :/ Thanks again :D Report Review
It's awesome! I always liked to think of Rose as a Slytherin :) great jobAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! :D Report Review
OMG! this is such an amazing novella!!
I am in shed loads of tears cus of this story. It was so amazing and it moved me so much. welldone for right such a good story!
xxAuthor's Response: Awww, thank you very much! Sorry for making you cry! Glad you liked it! xD Report Review
Okay, so first, a belated congratulations for completing your first novella-- especially so quickly!
I thoroughly enjoyed this, and it fit the criteria you were given perfectly. It's just so asdf amazing!
I'll be posting the challenge results later this weekend, so keep a look out of the forums :)
10/10 for this chapter, and 9/10 overall.
ada/bb4lAuthor's Response: Thanks! I still can't believe I've done it!
I can't tell you how glad I am that you enjoyed it!
Thank you for all of the lovely reviews, and constructive crit!
Leanne Report Review
NO. NO. NO. NO.
Amazing ending. Actually, amazing. Woah... I'm speechless... Woah...
Onto the Epilogue!
ada/bb4lAuthor's Response: Oh gosh! Speechless! Really!? Thank you! I really appreciate the appreciation! xD Report Review
Oh Merlin... I'm so into this right now! I need to know what happens! This is brilliant, I'm addicted!
10/10Author's Response: THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU Report Review
NO ROSE!! DON'T!!
You're truly a brilliant author! And this is completely fitting with your brief, so it's perfection Author's Response: aASDfjkjhgfd. Thank you so much! I don't know how to reply to such a lovely review! :D Report Review
This is intense. They killed him? Woah, this is intense.
I really enjoyed this chapter, I just have a couple of issues; there are a few grammar mistakes, and I feel like the engagement is a little too soon. I know that they've been together for a while in real time, but in terms of the story, it's only been a couple of chapters...
Still, great chappie :)
adahpfan/bb4lAuthor's Response: Ah! Grammar! My nemesis! Thanks for pointing it out though! :D I'm glad you liked it, and think it's intense! :D Leanne Report Review
Oh Merlin, Merlin, Merlin... This is unbearable. Great, but unbearable. Poor Percy, poor Rose...
Your writing is brilliant, I can really feel all of the emotions. The only bit of constructive criticism is that it is a little fast paced, and the chapters are a little too short for my liking, but that's just personal preference ;)Author's Response: Ah, thank you! Hopefully, one day I will be able to edit, and slow the pace down a little bit. Thanks for the advice! :) Report Review
HOW COULD THEY?!
Wow, that was intense! I can feel the anger bubbling in Rose... Best chapter so far! 10/10, loved it!
Ada/BB4LAuthor's Response: Oh my gosh! Really!? I'm so glad you're liking it so far! :D Report Review
I really enjoyed this chapter. It seems to be getting a lot darker, and the plot is thickening. I love Rose's relationships with her family-- very realistic!
Brilliant chapter :)
Ada/BB4LAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! ^^ I'm glad you can see the story becoming darker, and I'm happy you like the relationships. :) Leanne Report Review
Wow this was really good! I'm so glad that she didn't kill Harry. I knew that she was better than that! It was a very different way to look at Rose and Scorpius but I enjoyed reading it! Great job!Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's a fic I'm actually quite proud of, so I'm pleased you liked it. :) Report Review
Hi, it's Buckbeak4life from the forums (finally) here to review the rest :)
I really enjoyed this chapter and think that the plot is on it's way to become a lot darker. Scorpius is perfect! Nicer than the rest of his family, but with that dark edge... I love how you're doing Rose as well.
BB4LAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
I loved this so much! have you written any more stories if so what are they called. If you haven't please write another, maybe something like Rose and Scorpius went into Ravenclaw or Griffindor, just a suggestionAuthor's Response: Hi! Thank you for a really lovely review! I have written some other fics, but none are Sco/Rose. I'll consider your idea! Thanks again for the review! Leanne x Report Review
You make me cry, congrats. :PAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought it sufficiently emotional. :) Report Review
OH MY GOD. YOU MADE ME CRY. MISSION ACCOMPLISHED. THIS IS THE SECOND FIC EVER THAT MADE ME CRY, THAT EVEN THE TEARS KEPT ON FLOWING. Though I'm talking about Chapter 10 :PAuthor's Response: AW, TAWI! I'M SORRY FOR MAKING YOU CRY! ALTHOUGH, I ASSUME THAT MEANS YOU LIKED IT, SO THANK YOU! X Report Review
Who would expect sort of happy-ending after previous chapter? But I'm so glad Scorpius was sorry because he couldn't be that selfish. ThanksAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I wanted a lilttle bit of a happy ending, considering the events. I suppose that's just the romantic in me! Thanks again :) Report Review
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