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Review #1, by maskedmuggle Our House

7th August 2011:
Wow. A very curious and intriguing story! I really loved the situation with Alice and her family. It's very unusual to see triplets, and what made it more interesting was how they were orphans making a living by themselves. I have to say, you probably could have developed Draco's relationship to the family better, it felt a little rushed and just a bit confusing.

I liked how they were doing their jobs and felt they were being watched. And I especially liked how Dumbledore is involved! I can't really imagine Dumbledore spying on people but.. the plot is great, as is the writing!

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

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