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74 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ShootingStar96 Friendship and Revenge

10th April 2013:
Please update soon! You are a amazing writing and definitely have a way with words.
I simply can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: :) :) :) thank you so much!!! I'm so grateful for all the love that this story and my writing are getting, but I'm even more ecstatic that you guys enjoy it so much. It makes me feel so happy that you appreciate it, and I promise that more is coming as soon as I find time to write in my hectic schedule.

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Review #2, by anon Parchment and Planning

31st March 2013:
Not sure if anyone noticed but your chapter seems to have something wrong with it...like everytime the name "Hermione" was mentioned it said "Hermione...hermo...why weren't you named something simple like Janet.." or something like that. It was strange and frustrating to read around. But other than that it was a good chapter!

Author's Response: First off, I want to thank you for being such a concerned reader as to inform me of this "situation" and to do it without caps lock and curse words. Next, I can't believe you braved through the whole chapter despite all the chaos! It means so much to me that you think this story is good enough for that. Lastly, this was all an April Fools prank planned by the staff. They decided that they were going to stop anything romance related and replaced certain words with other ones. I was freaked out at first but I then Tinky Winkyd it ;)

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Review #3, by Kylie Happy

29th March 2013:
amazing chapter! you do a really great job with this! :) cant wait to read the next chapter, keep doing a great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and that you think that I'm doing well with it :) this is the reason that I want to keep writing (for you guys).

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Review #4, by rebakahgranger Friendship and Revenge

21st March 2013:
Please please update soon! This is one of the few Dramione stories that I like (I normally don't support Dramione) and it's not finished! I normally try to read finished stories, but this one's so good! So please update!

Author's Response: Once again, thank you so much for thinking this is that good of a Dramione story! But again, there are some WAY better Dramiones out there. Anyway, don't worry, I don't plan on giving up on this story, so updates will be coming :)

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Review #5, by Destiny And So...

21st March 2013:
Very good story was shocked at the cliff-hanger .when will the next chapter be up ?

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. You reviewed for Chapter 4, and I have up to Chapter 9 posted. Chapter 10 is currently in the making, but I can't tell you a specific deadline for when I'll have it up. Thanks though! :)

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Review #6, by TRwolf88 Friendship and Revenge

20th March 2013:
Please write quickly! I'm bursting with anticipation!

Author's Response: Haha I have break for a few days and I promise that I will write in that time so don't worry ;)

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Review #7, by TRwolf88 Happy

20th March 2013:
OMG this is my favorite story ever!
draco's personality is PERFECT!11

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!! You don't know how much it means to me that you appreciate this story so much (though it also scares me). I'm glad that you find Draco's personality fitting! :)

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Review #8, by rebakahgranger Friendship and Revenge

19th March 2013:
I love this story! Please update it
soon!! I normally don't really like
Dramione stories, but I like this one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's such an amazing compliment, but do check out the stories listed under my favorites. Those are some MAGICAL Dramiones and I'm honored that you think mine is this good. I will try to update ASAP, which will unfortunately turn out to be a matter of months.

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Review #9, by SILVER Friendship and Revenge

18th March 2013:
in one word it was "AWSM"

Author's Response: In one word, "Thanks!" ;)

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Review #10, by sins4thetwins Friendship and Revenge

18th March 2013:
it unfourtuanetly takes a very long time to write stories and i am unfortuanetly a very fast reader. but took you potentially a year to write took me two hours to read >.

Author's Response: :( I'm sorry, so tremendously sorry. But I just take so many classes that I'm up until midnight doing just homework. I LOVE writing though, so I do try to write as much as possible when I can, which, as you see, is not very often.

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Review #11, by sins4thetwins The Dare

18th March 2013:
well that escalated quickly.

Author's Response: Haha indeed it did. Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #12, by dracos lover Friendship and Revenge

24th February 2013:
Another great chapter please update soon, and i really do hope there will be more dramione parts in the near future.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! Don't worry, there will be many more Dramione scenes in the VERY near future (hint hint) ;)

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Review #13, by ayelen_rocko@hotmail.com Happy

18th January 2013:
hi ! I just wanted to tell you that I discovered your story a few days ago and I really love it !! I really hope you can update soon.

I wish you all the inspiration because this story is one of my favorites.

a kiss from Argentina

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, one of your favorites? Thank you so much, that's IMMENSELY sweet of you to say. I'm glad you like it so much, and I HAVE been working on the next chapter, but it's coming very slowly. I promise that I'll get it up ASAP for you guys :)

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Review #14, by dracos lover Happy

4th January 2013:
hahahaha i loved this chapter just like i loved your other ones. please uppdate soon cant wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Don't worry, I'm currently working on the next chapter and will have it up ASAP. :)

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Review #15, by shinichi Happy

11th December 2012:
wow really loved this chapter...u write very beautifulllyyy i think :P . :D
well eagerly waiting for the next chapter... 10/10
dramoine rockz,
shinichi

Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're so sweet :) I'm so sorry I've kept you guys waiting, but I have exams and won't be able to write for a week or two. But thank you!

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Review #16, by dracos lover Happy

30th November 2012:
I loved this chapter cant wait to find whats gonna happen next, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for your sweet review! I promise I'll update as soon as I can, but I can't promise that it will be quick :P

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Review #17, by THE HORROR Happy

29th November 2012:
-Ooh, great chapter! the "messing with Hermione is fulfilling and makes me happy" thing is very nice; I like it!
-"Weaselette" haha
-but "'Mione" kinda sounds odd.
-Okay, so just one critique, or a suggestion, really. I'm really liking Draco's dynamic here (cocky yet filling out into a happy character, all that jazz), but Hermione seems a bit of a, what's it called, a shrinking violet? Remember, she did punch him in the face in their third year. She's a strong, confident character, and I'd like to be able to see more of that confidence. I know she's still getting used to the fact that she's in love, but once she gets over her angst, seeing some interactions where they're both confident would be nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input! Thanks, yeah, I'll work on Hermione's character. You're right, she is a very confident person. And I love her for that. I suppose I was so caught up in Draco's cockiness that I completely forgot about her.

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Review #18, by shinichi Reasons

11th November 2012:
lolzz.ur a very nice author! :)
and yes the chpt was nice
as usaul dramoine rockz

Author's Response: Thank you soso much for all your sweet reviews! :)

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Review #19, by shinichi Confessions

10th November 2012:
hmmm.this was a long and gud chpt. liked it

Author's Response: Really, it was long? Well thanks anyway, I'm glad you're liking it all so far.

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Review #20, by shinichi House Unity

10th November 2012:
whoa!!! nice chpt!.loved the malfoy-hermoine kiss

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #21, by Charlotte Parchment and Planning

10th November 2012:
I'm loving it so far! Carry on writing.
Very well written and a great read!
Carry on doing what you do best! :D

Author's Response: Thank you sosososososososo much! :) it's sweet reviews like this that just make my day. Don't worry, I'm not planning to stop writing like EVER. :D

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Review #22, by shinichi The Bet

10th November 2012:
woah! osom chpt!!! lolzzz.poor draco he is gonna fall in love soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #23, by shinichi The Dare

10th November 2012:
:) very nice.keep on writng stories...as usual dramoine rockz

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that sweet review :) I definitely WILL keep writing. And yes, Dramione does indeed rock!

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Review #24, by Number Fifty-One Parchment and Planning

9th November 2012:
Good job! I'm not sure if this chapter's shorter than the others, or if that's my memory being faulty. Bit of nitpicking here: The Golden Trio is a fan term, is it not? I don't think it would really be something used in-universe.
And Draco wants their rooms to be connected? Hoping for some shenanigans, methinks? *waggles eyebrows*

Author's Response: OMGOMGOMG Thank you so much! Actually, this is my longest or second-longest chapter yet. Maybe it seemed shorter because it was primarily dialogue. Ooh, yeah, they wouldn't use that, would they? Well maybe that term got coined after the war in the Wizarding world too. And, hmm, I'm not giving away what Draco feels yet. You'll jut have to wait... :)

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Review #25, by Lily Parchment and Planning

5th November 2012:
I like it although they don't seem very in love yet... maybe I'll just have to wait. Nice description and I like the idea of them building the Head rooms together :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks for the review, I'm glad you're liking it. Yes, our favorite Hogwarts couple isn't quite in love get. It'll take them a long way to get there (if they do)... (Maniacal laugh) ;)

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