Please write more soon, it's an amazing fanfiction! Report Review
I love this story so far. It's really good. I'd like it if you wrote more soon? Report Review
Blaise seemed to take a quick liking to Hermione. But at least she'll have someone to comfort her.
Oh! I caught a misspelling- instead of 'easy' you wrote 'east'. There was also something else that was trifle- but I can't remember it now. But I liked this chapter- please continue(: Report Review
Oh wow. Interesting background information. Excited for the next chapter to see how Hermione handles everything- especially Draco. Hopefully they'll be able to move on from what happened in Hogwarts and become at least civil to each other.
And, just as an afterthought, you might want to go back and edit this chapter- there were a few mistakes.Author's Response: The Hermione/Draco relationship is going to be very difficult for me to write about, and keep realistic. I'd LOVE for everyone to be all cheery, but that wouldn't be too realistic. It would be more realistic if they were trying to kill each other, however, that might be over kill... Glad you enjoyed it and the next chapter is on the way. (: Report Review
just started this story on a rainy sunday. hope to enjoy more chapters. how many chapters do you plan?Author's Response: between 10/15 not quiet sure, really just depends how carried away I get writing. Haha(: Report Review
This seems pretty interesting so far. I'm liking the idea, but I do have bit of a problem with Hermione going so willingly with Narcissa and Blaise. It just doesn't seem to be within her character to go along with them. And I think she would have yelled at Draco- well, I guess that does depend on how badly they treat her, but all the same.
I thought this was a pretty good beginning and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: The next chapter is more of an overview of Hermione's early life with the Granger's, and it clears up most of the things you were questioning (her willingness to go with them, her mellowness) too bad it has to validate or it would be up today :/
But I'm happy you enjoyed it and the chapter will be up as soon as it validates (: Report Review
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