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Wow this was a very interesting chapter! :) Report Review
A child missing at Hogwarts, well, I've never read anything like that before. You know, considering he's not actually missing but he never wanted to go to Hogwarts in the first place which is something else I have never read either. This is a really original idea. I'd recommend getting a beta though to look over the chapters because there are just a few mistakes and a few things that need tweaking but nevertheless this is a solid story! Report Review
That's just terribly sad. Poor Hugo. I could really feel his pain and it just broke my heart. How could his own family not want him? I really just want to hug him. This is an interesting take on the Weasley-Granger family.
One thing though at that you missed the 't' in but. Not a big deal obviously but it's always helpful to me when people point out the tiniest things because I never get them when I edit! :D Report Review
WOW THIS IS AMAZING, so much into one chapter I cant wait to know whats going to happen next, how there going to act when they see hes gone?, will his dad even care? This is amazing keep writing it SO GOOD and heartfulled I felted like i was really in the story, This is the fastest ive came to love a story its great
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This story is really cool so far! :)Author's Response: well thank you very much :) hopefully you enjoy chapter 2 as much as you enjoyed chapter 1!
-jj Report Review
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