Aw this was cute.
I found it relatable and it's an interesting idea with the light in the library :)
There were a few grammar mistakes but overall I really liked it. :DAuthor's Response: Aw thank you =] I appreciate you reading and (especially) reviewing =] I will go back over it sometime and fix those mistakes =/ Just something that popped into my head one day, well the light in the library part anyway =]
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I just found this on your page...thought I'd do you the courtesy of reading it. :)
Well, I honestly have to say that Jess is like...exactly like me. Library for absolutely no reason...cannot focus on work...likes random stuff...completely invisible...most likely to investigate random pulsing light in the middle of the night...
Haha, the themes were good, even if there were a few spelling mistakes or grammar things here and there and whatnot.
So this is based on you? That's kinda cool. It's always nice whenever you can't talk to anyone about random stuff like how life's been and things, you can always randomly write about it. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading this!
I think a lot of people can relate to her, a lot of people feel invisible, left behind. And who wouldn't investigate a random pulsing light in the middle of the night in the back arse of the library =P
Since I don't have a beta there's bound to be mistakes here and there that word doesn't pick up on. Apologies and I hope it didn't take too much away from the story!
Some parts are very personal and then others are less so or not at all. Writing is a good outlet when you can't really get the words out or even think of the right words!
I really appreciate you r&r'ing this. Next chapter of NSN should be up in the next day or two. Hope you'll enjoy it =] Report Review
This was amazing! I absolutley loved it, it was so sweet and moving.
A girl who feels invisible actually becomes invisible. It was really interesting and I love how it focused on the importance and stregnth (did I spell that right? :p) of friendship :)
I can't wait for your WIP to be updated!
Fantastic work :)
- Ellie xAuthor's Response: I always look forward to reading your reviews =]
I had the idea in my head for a while but I wasn't sure how to go about it. Eventually got this out. My friends mean the world to me so I thought it was really important to show that in this story. That no matter how lonely and isolated you feel, there is always someone who cares! Friends give you the strength (you were nearly right =P) to carry on through the tough times.
Just put the next chapter in the queue so it should be up the end of next week =D Report Review
Aww. This story was precious. Really nice and it made me smile a lot.
You wrote it very well. Jess' character was brilliant. She was a very interesting girl, and I loved her! She was so unique and original and very well written.
This was overall written wonderfully. There was never too much of something in one area. There was a perfect balance of emotion, thoughts, actions, descriptions, and dialogue.
First person stories are always nice because I feel like they give you a direct link to that person's personality, really, and because of this, I feel like I got to know Jess so much better. Honestly, and she was an awesome girl. Some of the things she said or thought just made me laugh. Like not wanting pats, wanting actual hugs! And I totally agree on that. :P
This was wonderful. Very nice job! :)
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House: HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Hey there =] I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I wasn't sure how well it would be received really considering it's completely OC and very random! I did try really hard to not get too bogged down in the sadness stuff and throw in some humour every now and then. Nothing like a bit of sarcasm to lighten the mood ;) It's really good to know that you thought it was well written, I was a bit unsure of pieces of it as I found it hard to get some stuff down on paper and to explain it right!
Thank you so much for your lovely review, this really made me smile! =D Report Review
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