This story is so cute! It has quite a refreshing point of view. I have never read a story like this on this site before! Although both Sally and Grayson seem pretty infallible right now, I'm sure as the plot thickens, we'll learn more about their characters. I can't wait for the next chapter and I've saved it to my favorites! :)Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm quite flattered by your review, and I'm happy you enjoy it. Report Review
Aw. This was really lovely and warmed my little heart up. I really look forward to chapter three and I especially look forward to more Grayson. *wiggled eyebrows in a slightly creepy manner*. Your writing was lovely as well. I really like this story. Keep it up!
xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! You have no idea how much that helps me. I take it you'll be gaining a slight crush on Grayson. Good. That makes me very happy to know that you like it. :) Report Review
Gah! I spelled his name wrong! D:
Pretend that didn't happen, please?
LolAuthor's Response: Haha, Done :) Report Review
Ha..."You're the muggle." Like they're such a rarity that that's her identifier.
Lol, I love it :)
Also, love the name Greyson. Just saying :D
Can't wait to see where you take this!
-JessAuthor's Response: Aw thanks for the read Jess! I'm so happy that you love it :) The next chapter should be up in a few more days, but be prepared. This one has a bit more romance involved since they are older. Report Review
What a great idea for a story! Sooo intriguing! Loved the fact you stayed true to JKR's thoughts, saying nothing magical could come out of Vernon's blood. But loved that you put a twist on it and had one of Dudley's daughters want to be a witch and be friends with one!
Sally seems like a very likeable character, although a bit on the fantasful side! I also liked that Dudley and Harry did eventually make up, though I find it surprising they're getting on like close friends.
Who is the mystery wizard she's dancing with?
This was a really fun story! Loved it!
megan2u (Ravenclaw)Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! They are always greatly appreciated. I'm happy to know that someone is enjoying the story! It is a bit more fantastical than my other work, but I'm happy where I am going with it. I think that Harry and Dudley aren't that close, but it was polite to invite the family to his son's wedding since they are family and Sally is best friends with the bride.
Now on to the mystery wizard. You'll find out who he is soon enough, but I'll give you a clue. His father was in Dumbledore's Army, and he was a Ravenclaw just like you :P Report Review
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