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Review #1, by ms4aisa Head Boy

24th September 2011:
aww soo good! :) I'm usually for Scorpius/Rose but now I kinda want Scorpius to stay with Lily and Rose to get together with Elijah :P Please update soon! Can't wait :)

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Review #2, by NightRose Head Boy

10th September 2011:
Hey this is a lovely start to your story! :)

I think your idea for the head boy, head girl and prefects to live in their own special tower is really great and original!

I also really like the way you show the tension between Scorpius and Rose, then Elijah and Rose. Is there going to be a sort of triangle situation in the future, I can't wait for the next chapter and I will look forward to reading it!


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Review #3, by nikaya29 Head Boy

10th September 2011:
hey i like your story.. it seeems different :P .. i hope u'll update soon n wont keep us waiting :P

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Review #4, by 19 whitehorse Head Boy

10th September 2011:
Great start to your story :)
Will be reading more. You know I know a guy named Elijah, cool eh? I always love finding names of characters I recognize :D
Update soon :D

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