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Review #1, by Anne The Jedi Council

29th November 2011:
This is amazing! I've been wanting to write a Star Wars/ Harry Potter fan fic for ages, but I never get the chance. Keep it up! I'm lovin' it a lot!

Just one thing though. Obi Wan seems a little...odd. The way he talks is really weird for him. Not trying to criticise! Just thought I'd point it out!

Author's Response: Thank you for all the positivity! I love Star Wars and Harry Potter, so it works:) And yes, I've noticed Obi-Wan in pretty weird, I might go back and change it a bit haha, thanks for pointing that out:)
-Arya


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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 The Jedi Council

22nd September 2011:
This story gets better and better with each chapter I've read so far. I love everything about this story so far. You bring a whole new prospective to an old film plot. 10/10 and plz update asap adding to fav lists.

Author's Response: Thanks you! I try:) I have major writer's block right now, but i will try to update faster. I actually have a break from AP history this week, so it'll give me a chance to update:) Oh and thanks for reviewing every chapter! It means a lot!
-Arya:)


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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Settleing In

22nd September 2011:
Excellent chapter. I loved the way that you show the childish side of Ani. Mind you he never really had much of a childhood what with growing up as a slave. Excellently written and moving on. 10/10.

Author's Response: Thanks! I felt so bad for little Ani is the first movie when he had to choose between his mom and Jedi training, so I thought I'd give him a bit of a childish side:)
-Arya


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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 The Battle of Coruscant

22nd September 2011:
Star wars is (next to all the star trek programmes) my all time favourite Sci-Fi films. And I loved the start of this story so much,I've added to favs right away. I loved the way you managed to incorporate the characters together. 10/10 and must move on.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Star Wars is like my absolute favorite, and putting Harry Potter and Star Wars together...well, I couldn't resist! I'm sooo glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing:)
-Arya


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Review #5, by Sazzagee The Battle of Coruscant

26th August 2011:
I saw the banner for this on your page and thought jokingly, hey, its Anakin and Obi-Wan! ;) Then I realised it actually WAS Anakin and Obi-Wan ;) Having watched Revenge of the Sith last night (weirdly enough) felt compelled to read it. Nice work! :D

Author's Response: Haha, thank you!! I absolutely adore Star Wars so I couldn't resist! Haha..thanks for taking the time to review:)
-Arya


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Review #6, by chewytriacle The Battle of Coruscant

3rd August 2011:
I adore Star Wars! I can see that this is going to be an amazing story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Harry Potter and Star Wars are my two favorite thing:) Thanks for reviewing!!
-Arya


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Review #7, by UH60TI The Battle of Coruscant

2nd August 2011:
Very interesting concept. I would not have put the two series together. However, I like the way you have done it. This looks like it will be an interesting story to read.

You do have a nice way of writing and a great pace in this chapter. It was very easy to read.

I did notice a couple of spelling mistakes, you may want to get a Beta to look over your work, if you don't already have one.

I look forward to more of this story. I think it will be very enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Star Wars and Harry Potter are my two favorite things :) And I will look it over and get the spelling fixed. Thanks for reviewing! It means a lot:)
-Arya


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