Please come back!!! I am waiting for a new chap

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Please... next chapter!!!

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please! continue the story

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I want to read more plis! i like you storie

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I really like this story! :)

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Another great chapter!
I'm so glad to see you updated and hope you update again soon :)

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Hey!!! i like your story, i want to know what happens with Rose.

Author's Response: AH thank you!!! And there will be lot of Rose in the next few chapters, so keep a look out for more!

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I'm so glad you finally updated!!! It was a great chapter. Defianatly worth the wait :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad I finally updated too! And you won't have to wait that long for the next chapter, don't you worry!

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I wanna write a review but the story was too good for me to critize, I loved it but I'm too tired to go in to some wacko discription of why I like it... But I must ask you one thing.

Where is the next button?

Author's Response: This review kind of just made my day! Haha I'm so glad you like the story so far, and don't worry, there will be a next button soon!

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good chapter!
1 little thing i have to nitpick on, in one paragraph you use "their" when it should be "they're" I believe its the line either they're getting drunk or they're going somewhere
but hey, if thats the only qualm i can find, you're obviously doing pretty well!

Author's Response: Oh thanks for pointing that out. I do my own editing, so sometimes I miss some mistakes. Thanks for reading though! :D

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Why are you diaapointed with how you ended this chapter? I personally think it ended great. Can't wait to see what happens next:)

Author's Response: Haha I have this other part that I was going to add, but then the chapter would just be too long, so I just rushed the ending a bit. I'm glad you like it so far! There's more to come soon!

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just responding to your author's note =D hahaa no complaints. i enjoy this story (as you probably know considering that i always leave a review, haha) anyhoo, keep writing. I need to know what happens!!!

Author's Response: I like that you always leave a review! They make my day :D haha there's more to come soon!

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Great update. It really made my day:) hope you update again soon

Author's Response: I'm glad I could make you happy! More coming soon!

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I love this story! :) 10/10!

Author's Response: Me too! Haha thanks!!!

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Great story, can't wait to see where it leads:)
update soon!

Author's Response: I can't wait to see where it leads either :D More coming soon!

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you're doing a good job. i can't wait to see what happens when you really start to get into the story... so keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! And I hope you like what I've got planned!

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I realy anjoyed the first few chapters. Like you, I usually don't read an OC story, but this seems like it's going to be a good story.
I trust that you'll make the Rose pregnancy storyline as original as possible.
Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint you! Thanks for the review and keep reading :D

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I think your chapter is really nice. i personally like stories with OC characters (especially in the Next Generation) so I have no reason to have something against that ;).
I hope you make the whole Rose pregnancy as uncliché as posible. but I belive that you can do that, with the whole POV of her sister thing.
I hope to read more of your story. I like it.

Author's Response: I've always had a hard time getting into a story with an original character. I think it's because I like JK's characters so much that I get disappointed when the story's not based on one of them.
With the pregnancy, I'm going to write it as best as I can and I hope everyone will be happy with it. Thanks for the review, there's more to come soon!

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I really enjoyed reading this one =) usually it takes a few chapters for me to get hooked on a story, but I was grabbed pretty much immedietley. When I first saw the whole Rose/Scorpius pregnancy thing I was at first nervous because its done often, but you've already done a great job of distinguishing the story from the others. Keep writing! Please. I'm curious now.

Author's Response: Yeah, the pregnancy thing is used a lot, and it wasn't a part of my original story line, but I got the idea in my head and now I can't imagine the story without it. Thanks for the good review!

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I really liked this! :) keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks, and I will!

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it was really good when are you gonna right more?

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I already have four chapters written :D

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