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Review #1, by norbert the dragon Parseltounge

16th October 2011:
poor lily :(
LOVED Scorpius' POV though! sooo funny!
keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I wasn't sure if I was TOO guyish.thank you though :)

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Review #2, by norbert the dragon The Quidditch Bet

16th October 2011:
OMG! they are so evil!
Scorpius is so hilarious and rude! love him!
love your writing! Update!

Author's Response: Haha, I know. It's fun to write a guy. I'll update soon :)

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Review #3, by norbert the dragon Prolouge

16th October 2011:
Really Good! can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Aww thank you :)

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Review #4, by Anita The Quidditch Bet

30th August 2011:
Great story. I like how Lily is already struggling with her dark side. I am really excited if she is the one who did the crucio. Post another chapter soon. About how many chapters will the story be

Author's Response: Thanks! I will, sorry about the long wait. I went on vacation and didn't bring my laptop. I'm not sure exactley, I know how it will end, but I'm not sure about the inbetween :) I'll try and finish chapter 3 soon.
-Lilyandscorpius


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Review #5, by maskedmuggle Prolouge

7th August 2011:
Aw! Lily is just so absolutely shocked and almost in despair at being in Slytherin. But I'm sure Scorpius will be in Slytherin too? And I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen then!

I thought your writing was really great! Seeing all the other next-gen characters was really nice, and the way you introduced them gave them some character. I like Lily's innocence! She was just very 11-year-old ish, which great! I really liked when she went to the bathroom and saw Scorpius. Overall, some great writing!

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

Author's Response: Whoo!! First review!!! Thanks! Yes, he is in Slytherin. Good, I was wondering if I had made her too mature. I don't really know what else to say besides thanks! The next chapter will be in the queue soon since I was on a boat. I'm glad you liked it :)

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