377 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Gary B. True Deceptions

8th September 2014:
Harland is going to eat draco!

Author's Response: Or worse. ;)

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Review #2, by Gary B. A Giant Quandry

5th September 2014:
Early graduation! great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! Had to find some way to get Harry through school :)

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Review #3, by Gary B. Aftermath

4th September 2014:
Crazy girl is back lets see what she tries next

Author's Response: She tries a whole lot... ;)

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Review #4, by Gary B. Revealing Research

3rd September 2014:
They going to get in trouble!

Author's Response: Suspense! Thanks for reading!

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Review #5, by Gary B. The Devil is in the Details

3rd September 2014:
Hermione is in trouble

Author's Response: She did run away from home after all... :)

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Review #6, by Gary B. Hotel Harry

3rd September 2014:
I am surprised these stories don't get more reviews. I think that these stories are awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're enjoying them :) They are more of a pet project for me that I've only kept going for the few regular readers I have... and because I'm also curious to see how it'll eventually end :) But it is lovely to receive reviews letting me know whether or not something is working and I'm happy for every one I receive. Thanks for continuing to read, hope it continues to entertain you!

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Review #7, by Druna 4ever Moving On

28th August 2014:
This is an amazing story. I've read this and the previous one and am looking forward to #3. The detail you've put into it is incredible. I hope you enjoyed writing them as much as I've enjoyed reading them. I'll be looking out for future stories, not just the continuation of this plot. Just a suggestion, well really more like a plea, keep Hermione and Fred together because I don't think I could read #3 if you didn't. Good luck writing and thank you for many hours of enjoyment.

Author's Response: Muwhahaha... no couple is safe! Actually I say that honestly because there is no plot or outline and I have no idea what comes next until I sit down to write a new chapter armed only with notes of what's already happened (to keep track of all those details) :) When I started the first one, I was a total H/Hr fan and only once the story developed and I saw where it was going did I change my mind and am now a huge fan of all but one of the couples I have (not liking Ron and Jacey which is probably why they keep having so many problems) So I can promise to not consciously split up Fred and Hermione, but there are just no guarantees until the end I suppose. Thanks so much for reading, I'm very happy you've enjoyed them and yes, for the most part I have loved writing them. (I had started the 1st one before HBP came out and after it took me awhile to get back into the enjoyment... same thing happened after DH. You can probably tell, it's when the stories start to drag and get boring until I wrote myself back into something interesting happening) Please forgive the wait once you catch up to the new chapter... I have two jobs, my other writing and freelance in the entertainment and editing fields so sometimes I can't get to the FF as often as I'd like. Thanks again!

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Review #8, by Druna 4ever Fighting to Go Home

27th August 2014:
Just wondering, U mentioned Parvati in this chapter a couple of times, is she here as a vampire or did u just write Parvati instead of Padma? Thx
Btw the story is great and I'm looking forward to #3. Thx for bothering to continue a long, but awesome fanfic. I know I would have given up in the early stages of #1

Author's Response: I probably made a mistake... so many names, I actually do it often (I think this is also the chapter where I accidentally wrote Simon instead of Colton when Ginny is being rescued) Parvati is at the vampire colony at this time.

Glad you're liking the story... I am a writer and so it's hard for me to give up anything I write (and it's hard to find a proper ending as you can tell) :) I was a huge HP fan.. until the 6th and then the 7th book, so getting to write it out how I want has reawakened my love for the first 5 books which is one reason I keep going... the other is that I like to entertain, I'm an entertainer by trade and so knowing there are others like yourself who actually like these stories is a strong motivator to keep going until I do find a place to properly end it. Thanks so much for reading, you all make it feel like the effort is worth it :) Happy reading!

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Review #9, by toothfairyliz Moving On

29th June 2014:
ugh loved it so much! cannot wait for the journey to continue in the next installment, truly one of the most brilliant stories to be found on this site.

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad to know you liked the story, it makes me feel the effort of writing it was worth it :) See you next story!

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Review #10, by toothfairyliz Ron's Birthday

29th June 2014:
i can't believe its almost over! I can't wait for the next journey to begin!

Author's Response: It had to end somewhere... otherwise this would become more the Neverending Story than HP :) Still a lot to come in the next sequel though so stick around, I'm glad to have you as a constant reader!

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Review #11, by DUMBELDAVE Moving On

27th June 2014:
Loved every minute of this story and can't wait to get to the next one !

Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks! And the first chapter of the new one is already up :)

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Review #12, by DUMBELDAVE Ron's Birthday

17th June 2014:
Brilliant game for ron. LOVEDIT

Author's Response: Thanks! I've posted the final chapter of Coven of Warriors so look for it and the first chapter of the next story soon!

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Review #13, by Doug james Dealing With Dangerous People

17th June 2014:
Wow this is really a novel of truly epic proportions. I thought the Ring of Mykele was good and you have somehow managed to continue the interest into this, so far excellent, tome. I do enjoy the elements of suspense you conjure and your action scenes are ever interesting. Nice that you have saved Ginny but will you be able to do the same for Ron? Draco is developing nicely too and you can feel the tension you are maintaining between the characters. Just some 40+ chapters to go and I'm looking forward to them. Many thanks for all your efforts.

Author's Response: Thank you for an awesome review! So glad such a long story is able to hold interest, especially since it's all made up chapter by chapter... it's nice to know that it all fits together- I haven't really had a chance to read it as a whole myself lately because of time so I can only hope I'm making sense to everyone :) A lot can happen in 40+ chapters, so look for a lot more action, drama and mystery!

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Review #14, by DUMBELDAVE Restless

14th June 2014:
Oh CRAP. You can't just stop there. !
Keep writing

Author's Response: I had to stop there, I ran out of room :) I've posted the next chapter and it's in the validation queue where the wait is currently 4 days, so look for it soonish :)

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Review #15, by Pri Restless

10th June 2014:
I think it's going too slow coz of so many things. waiting for the next chaps.

Author's Response: Agreed! It's going slow right now because I'm wrapping up to end the story and start the new one... it's long/slow in general because I ramble and have no plot planned so each chapter just comes out as it does which is generally longer than it needs to be :) Plus I like having the story from so many character POVs, but it takes a lot of time to establish everything that way. But alas, it is what it is, and it's looong and sometimes a bit slow... but I do hope it at least tells a full story :) I've posted the next chapter and it's in the validation queue where the wait is currently 4 days, so it should be up soonish. Thanks for reading!

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Review #16, by toothfairyliz Restless

10th June 2014:
such suspense! you always leaving me wondering about every single character and how they will turn out!!

Author's Response: Good! It keeps you all reading while I come up with the next chapter ;) I've posted today, the wait for the validation queue is currently 4 days, so it should be up soon!

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Review #17, by tanya Howley House

8th June 2014:
Post the next chapter soon please!!

Author's Response: I've posted it, it has been in the validation queue for the last four days... it should be on the site any time now. Thanks for reading!

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Review #18, by DUMBELDAVE Howley House

8th June 2014:
Awesome story just love it ,can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks! The new chapter should be up any time now... I posted it four days ago and the validation time was four days long so look for it really soon :)

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Review #19, by DUMBELDAVE Visions of the Past

7th June 2014:
How can he be more unwelcome ? Lol

Author's Response: I guess we'll see ;)

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Review #20, by DUMBELDAVE Familiar Faces

7th June 2014:
Loved it ! Off to read more !

Author's Response: And lots more to come! Keep on loving it! :)

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Review #21, by DUMBELDAVE The Forest of Furies

1st June 2014:
Oh great It had to be the center. Ugh

Author's Response: Of course! :)

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Review #22, by DUMBELDAVE En Route

31st May 2014:
CRIKEY now what ? ? ?
Great chapter !

Author's Response: Thanks! And there's still a lot more to come ;)

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Review #23, by toothfairyliz Howley House

28th May 2014:
i'm loving how everyones stories can be woven together so perfectly.

Author's Response: I'm trying... sometimes it's hard to remember it all, even for me :) Glad it's making sense to you and other readers. New chapter should be up in a few days!

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Review #24, by DUMBELDAVE Heading Down Under

28th May 2014:
Oh vey Draco what have you done !

Author's Response: Draco has become a very complicated character to write... he's sort of become a parallel to Harry's character, with Harland standing in for Voldemort. The only difference is that Draco has a far better understanding of how the world currently works as he tends to remain in reality and (usually) thinks his actions through. But with Harland, all good sense goes out the window because he wants to be rid of the one person from his past life who could still control him. I think I like him very much as he's grown through these two stories and he's quickly becoming one of my top favorites :)

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Review #25, by Gary B. Howley House

27th May 2014:
Hey, another great chapter. Leaving us on yet
another cliff hanger makes me want to pull my hair
out lol

Author's Response: Well don't go bald! I've posted the next chapter and it's in the validation queue. The wait is currently four days but hopefully it'll shorten if more admins come on to check :)

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