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Review #1, by Padfoot_The_Author33 Cloves of Garlic

17th September 2011:
1)HEH!
2)Love Sirius's oath.
3)Professer Edwards is amazing.
3)Scary Dream!!!
4) I love the beatles

Author's Response: 1) I know.
2) Me too :D
3) True true...
3) Why'd you put three twice..?
4) Yes, we all know... trust me, we all know.


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Review #2, by Padfoot_The_Author33 Sunlight

9th August 2011:
I love The Lost Boys! A ton of inside jokes came from that night. Not as much as the sleepover before that!
"No it's my.father...?"

Author's Response: oh yeah and what was the one about the bra lady?? hahaha. oh, the inside jokes we make. and i know you love The Lost Boys, though not nearly as much as I do :P

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Review #3, by MileyMalfoy Sunlight

6th August 2011:
Oooo this was rather interesting. I never really thought about what would happen if there were vampires in Hogwarts. While I tend to agree with Lily at the beginning about vampires that sparkle this definitely does grab attention. It's interesting to see a different take on Lily's school days given the ones I've read have always surrounded the marauders with her being almost to one side? If that makes sense?

I noticed one particular place where you had a typo: "No one really new them" - new should be knew.

My favourite bit was definitely Jami's reaction to the theory that Sirius and James have about the other group of the girls. It was also quite nice that Lily let James take her to the Room of Requirement even though she didn't seem sure of it.

Definitely an interesting take of a story, I'm quite intrigued about where this would go.

Miles
(Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: thanks! this story is like my baby, because as i said, its based on The Lost Boys which i idolize as a movie. and i know exactly what you mean about most of the Lily/Marauder stories, i completely agree and try my best to avoid that. thanks for noting the typo, i don't really have time to edit so i really appreciate you telling me, i'll get right on that. i'm glad you liked the story! i'll continue as soon as possible!

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