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Review #1, by maskedmuggle The end

8th August 2011:
Hehe, first off, the summary of this story caught my eye because it seemed really different, and I was wondering, "how is she going to do that?" And you did do it! Definitely one of the more original ideas of hp fan fic I've ever read. I liked how you kept this as a HP fan fic, while at the same time expressing your views on the movie!

I really liked the whole idea of this story, and the way you wrote it. I have to admit, it wasn't making much sense to me at first, I was a bit confused, but gradually I got the sense of what was going on. I really liked Colin's bit, since I can really understand that! My other favourite bit was when Ginny said, at the end, actually, they cut that scene. The whole ending was really nicely done! What a unique piece of writing!

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

Author's Response: Finally, I get the time to answer all these wonderful reviews! Thanks! You, lirates, made my day.

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Review #2, by Akussa The end

6th August 2011:
Hello!!

That was brilliant! You really captured all that went through my head as I watched the movie as well. Those scenes were a bit ackward weren't they? But to have Voldemort try and direct the kids was so great. The guys is a great vilain but a director? Meh...

Strangely, you managed for this to be original and not cliché and I loved that. You've gotten the parody tone very well and it was a fun read. I also enjoyed the how clean your writting is; people often don't really mind their grammar when writting parodies (I honestly don't know why but it's something I've seen a lot) so, I enjoyed that.

If there was one piece of advice I could give you, it would be to work on your summary. I had seen this in the archive a couple times before but the summary didn't appeal to me so I passed by it. Now that I've read it, I want to kick myself for not reading it sooner. So in order to get more people to enjoy this awesome piece of work, you should definitly work on a summary that would appeal to more readers.

Akussa (Gyrffindor)

Author's Response: Oh, Akussa! You make me blush with these. Really.
When I wrote them, of course I was pleased, but you make it look like they're way much better than I ever hoped. :)


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Review #3, by ginnypotter242 The end

5th August 2011:
Haha, this was amazing. It was so funny-even though I usually don't like parody's. I was so annoyed that they cut Neville's hero time and the James/Teddy/Victoire thing! And Ron's jokes of course.
xD, yes, only the four of them are freakish enough to stay on the platform long after it's gone. I love the little commentary between Harry, Voldemort and Neville. It was so funny! And then Colin "Oh... I guess I’ll find a tower to jump off, then...,” xD that line was so funny. I was upset that they didn't show Colin's death in the movie-it shows how many people died for Harry. And they didn't do Fred's death nearly well enough. And the wand! Just...oi. But, like you said the movie was good.
Well, after that very rambliy review, I would just like to say again, that it was a very funny story, and I loved it. Good job.

~Sara
puppyluv242 (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Haha! You made me find it funnier than I though it would turn out. Thanks!

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Review #4, by SexyDoorFrames The end

5th August 2011:
I enjoyed this. It was so funny at times. I haven't seen the movie, but I have yet to watch part 1 so it's all good :) I liked seeing it the way you saw it. I loved the Colin's part because it was so funny because it's sad that he's been liked, kicked out of a film for a boy to take his exact space. It makes no sense to me. I loved the end part 'Actually, they cut that scene' I can't believe that scene is not going to be in the film! It was the whole reason JKR wrote the epilogue. Anyway, good one shot and I really enjoyed it. You have an effortless knack for humour.

- SexyDoorFrames, Gryffindor.

Author's Response: Too bad you didn't see the movie before reading it. Honestly, when I first came here, I just couldn't write humor. It's incredible what you guys made for me. :)

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Review #5, by melian The end

4th August 2011:
Ramona, this is hilarious! Of course, the fact that I haven't seen the last movie yet probably dampened it a little, but I can't say now that I don't have a feel for how you saw it. I loved the little asides about Draco being balding and bearded in 19 years time,and the reappearance of Colin Creevey was hysterical. "No one's seen me dead so I have to be alive, right?" Loved it. The trouble is that when I DO see the movie, probably early next week, I'll now be thinking of this rather than what's actually on the screen. Oh well. There are worse things to think about! :)

melian (gryffindor)

Author's Response: Oh, those were just thoughts of a reader while watching a movie.:D

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Review #6, by madi The end

2nd August 2011:
I laughed at this, though I was hoping you would have picked up on Harry and his mothers remarkably similar eye colours lol.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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Review #7, by Zora Weasley The end

1st August 2011:
That was just what I was thinking while whatching the movie. You wrote that really hilarious.
I loved the movie too, but those things you wrote were the things that anoyed me too. It is awsome to have such a funny one-shot about them.
I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks much for the review. I'm glad you thought the same.:D

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