Hey, it's me again.
I'm going to say this again: wow.
I was browsing through stories and yours popped up again. I looked at the date, and it said that you updated since the last time I read it, so I thought maybe you added something. And boy, did you add something!
I loved it! Absolutely loved it! I really could feel the regret Regulus is feeling throughout the story, especially as he's drinking that vile potion. Adding what you did made him so much more real. Great job! Report Review
Sad. Very sad. Poor Kreacher, having to watch his master die :( My soft spot for Regulus is now growing, he really did die a hero and if Sirius had known, then he would've been proud.
It was heartbreaking to read the part when Regulus yelled at Sirius. I could practically feel and imagine how Sirius would've felt!
Grammar was great. Even though the chapter was quite short, it was very well-written!
This review is the first of three. Don't forget, you won third palce in my Gods and Goddesses Challenge! ;) Sorry the reviews took so long! I'll be reviewing your other chosen stories now... Report Review
Wow. Very chilling.
This is well written. Even though it's very sad, it was an enjoyable read. One thing I missed was more of Regulus' memory because when Dumbledore drank the potion, he was reliving one of his worst regrets. Other than that, I loved how Regulus drank to Sirius. The irony of Sirius never knowing is brilliant.Author's Response: Oh, that's a brilliant idea. I could add Regulus' worst memories. Thank you for reviewing and reminding me of that! :) Report Review
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