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Review #1, by Maelody IntrestAndTension

6th March 2014:
This seems like a sweet enough beginning to a story! :) A little editing, and it'll be grand! :D

It's so interesting when people write new characters coming in during the later years of Hogwarts! It always makes me wonder why they've had to come at such an odd time? Is it family issues? Have their powers grown too strong? Were they late bloomers? Apparently, Jane is a prodigy. I wonder what kept her from school for so long?

I especially like that this doesn't seem like it's going to turn into a Ron/Harry/Jane love triangle. Draco makes it more believable because Draco wouldn't know to back off for Harry, but Ron is meant for Hermione! I just know it! :love:

Anyway, I hope to see this story continue someday! Or at least I hope you continue to write! I can see some true potential here! :D Happy writing! :D


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