Good start. Neville acts just the way I imagine he wouldve if J.K Rowling had gone into more detail on his character. He's so cute, I feel so bad that Kendall doesnt know his name. Report Review
I have never read a Neville fic before being more of a Remus fan myself. But I have to say I REALLY enjoyed that!
It is well written and all sorts of funny and cute!
I think you did a great job at portraying Neville.
Awkward and adorable!
I can't wait to read more!
10/10.Author's Response: I am so happy you like it!
I am having a bit of writers block at the moment, but Chapter 2 should be up within the week! Report Review
heyy!! IT'S ME AGAIN!!
I am pleased to tell you that my newest favourite charecter is NEVILLE!!
After watching the newest movie i became obsessed in him and his awesomeness! He is the BEST!! I LOVE HIM!
So of coarse i had to come and take a peep to see if you had written any more Neville/OC storys.
so herree i amm!
an amazing chapter for what looks like an AMAZING story!!
-ravenclawgrl Author's Response: I am so happy you have converted to Nevilleism! xD I wanted to write another Neville/OC that wasn't so angsty!
I will be updating soon!
Thanks for the review! Report Review
that was great :D i love your style of writing and i think you portrayed neville really well :) im looking forward to reading more chapters!
-AnoymooseAuthor's Response: I am so happy you think I write a good Neville. I love him and I was worried that I wasn't doing him justice!
Thanks for the review and I am so glad you like the story so far! Report Review
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