7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by magicmuggle01 A Time Travel Chapter

20th October 2011:
A nice start. I often wondered how Filtch came to have the map. 9/10 and to move on.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #2, by LunaLover Banana Peels and Passwords

18th September 2011:
I love it!
I still think you need to write a marauders story.

Author's Response: Thanks! still writing still have to post Draco/other first.

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Review #3, by LunaLover A Time Travel Chapter

18th September 2011:
Haha catfood. That's funny.
You need to write a marauders story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm writing one right now but I have not posted yet, my Draco/other character comes first!

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Review #4, by Gred N Forge Banana Peels and Passwords

16th September 2011:
I loved it!!! Very cute and funny!! It's just the kind of story I was looking for too. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by Tonks101 Banana Peels and Passwords

15th August 2011:
Very nicely finished! But one question/satement.you are big meany for making me wait like everyone else to read this chapter!!! I will get back at you dum dum! Hehehhehehe (evil laugh) anyway. That was awesome!

Author's Response: Why thank you. I updated the same day it was verified!

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Review #6, by Daanana A Time Travel Chapter

13th August 2011:
The idea is great and I love the setting you've created, but just as I've gotten all into the story, the chapter's finished ..

You might want to make it a tad bit longer. Might extent the prank James and Sirius pulled on Filch a bit. Now it's basically one sentence telling us there was fireworks and exploding cat food and that was it. I think you could delve deeper into that.

I do like the story, however. And I can't wait to see what youre going to do with it. Off to the next chapter!

Love,
Danielle

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Author's Response: I really do appreciate your opinion it means a lot to me. I think you are right about making it longer and my brother thinks so too. I will think and mull over the idea of adding to the story, but right now I am working on three others (in my notebook so they are not on the site yet) Thank you so much!

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Review #7, by Tonks101 A Time Travel Chapter

11th August 2011:
Amazing! Lovely! Bloody brilliant! Now get out of the lake and start typing the next chapter Missy!

Author's Response: Hehe its kind of creepy tou knowing i am at the lake right now. And its on the internet. But that is whatIi get for being your only friend that respects and understands your way of thinking. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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