I really hope you update soon, I've been checking back here every weekend to see if you've posted the next chapter yet. I think I'm a little obsessed with Barty/Gwen :) Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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She had better end up with Sander. Barty is bad news and Sander is much more caring. Keep up the writing! Love this story :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Without wanting to give away what's going to happen, I will say I agree that Barty is bad for Gwen and Sander is a much nicer guy. But I won't say who she ends up with ;) Hope you stick around to find out! I'm working on the next chapter now. Report Review
I honestly love your story too much! I love Gwen, I love Barty and most of all I love Gwen and Bart together. I'm interested to see when you go from here so please keep updating! 10/10
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Good job. I like the descriptive words and well thought-out plot.Author's Response: Thank you. I have put a lot of planning into this, so I'm glad that it shows through. Report Review
this is amazing. keep up the good work and keep writing more.
when i come home i always re read this story :)Author's Response: Thanks very much! Don't worry, there's going to be plenty more to come of this. I have a lot of it written in advance. Report Review
that was a very good first chapter! you have some really great descriptions of things and your writing is really high qualityAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback and I'm very glad you like it. Report Review
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