This is amazing. I love how this and '3am' are two different points of view of the same events, the stories intertwine really well.
The lilies on the table are a very clever symbol, especially the fallen petal.
Great story :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review:) Yes I got the idea for 4am first, and then thought that people might have wanted to see if from Rons side of the story:) Report Review
The despair, the pain the frustration aptly done.
Nothing more than necessary or out of place.
Good piece.Author's Response: Thank you very much:) Report Review
Oh, I meant more stories, but a sequel would be amazing!Author's Response: haha ok a sequel may be in the future, but right now I'm working on Ron's POV for this story, like what he was thinking and way he did it:) Report Review
story was very good, seems to be typical ron, would make a good sequelAuthor's Response: I wasn't going to make a sequel to this but since each reviewer wants one, one may be coming up in the future:) Report Review
Wow! I can't wait for more :) soon pleaseAuthor's Response: I don't know if you mean more chapters or more stories, cause this is only a one-shot but peace2lovepotter suggested a sequel so you may see one once some ideas start rolling:) Report Review
Aw, this was so so sad! I felt so much for Hermione in it! All the words were written beautifuly and wanted me to read more. I would love a sequel! Love Livvy xxx :) xxx 10/10Author's Response: Aw why thank you:)This was meant to be a one shot but maybe I will make a sequel! It will probably be another one-shot but I'll trying to get some ideas rolling:) Report Review
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