Awesome chapter!! Poor George:( *sniffles* So adoption, is ruled out... hmmm... wonder who Rose's parents are... Hermione was acting awefully odd at breakfast... I think I know why :) anywhoo your grammar as far as i noticed is really good and i can't find any mistakes and honestly i can't wait for more! 8/10Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew! And whew about my grammar. My boyfriend tends to make fun of it quite often. See the thing about writing is you can read through it and adjust it. Meanwhile, when you are actually talking it is hard to have good grammar. :) More should be coming in a week or so. Report Review
I have a feeling Malfoy is Rose's father and I have to say I'm looking forward to Ron finding out and divorcing Hermione for being trampy enough to sleep with a Death Eater.Author's Response: Well I am not going to say anything. :) Just wait and see if your guess is right! Thanks for the review! Report Review
hey,, i really like this and hope you put up more asap:) the story line is very intruiging and i have a feeling its going to be very good.Author's Response: Thank you! I am going to submitting chapter 3 tomorrow if everything goes well. Report Review
When does the next chapter come out? I love itAuthor's Response: it will be submitted soon! Report Review
KEEP WRITING. I love it. :]Author's Response: aw thanks! :) Report Review
Nice detail, storyline, and character development. I like where this is heading, and you should definitely continue with it! Added to favourites. ;)Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Report Review
First of, changing a person's appearance or her personality or who her parents are, just to fit in a story is pathetic and shows lack of imagination and ability of keep the characters faith to the books. Rose from redhead, bushy hair with blue eyes, and her mother's intelligence, is replaced by this 'thing' which is somehow Draco's daughter?
Secondly, Rose lives 15 years as a Weasley, but suddenly she realises that she doesn't belong there? And where is the love for her father? Fake or not, shoudn't she love her father Ron?
My guess is that Rose is the daughter of Draco and Luna. Luna in reality is a Weasley, but because Arthur didn't have money to raise her, he sold her to Xenophilius. Draco is really a Black. It happened after a night of passion between Narcissa and Sirius. Also he's not blonde, but his hair are black, just like his fathers. He's using spells to make his hair look blonde and pass as a Malfoy. Hermione and Ron are brother/sister in reality, but from different fathers. Hermione is redhead and daughter of Arthur and Ron is blond with green eyes and he's in fact the son of Lucius after a wild night he had with Molly.
Yes, the story is funny, but honestly, even if you hate Draco/Hermione you should have put the parody warning. I know that with this story you're trying to make fun of the dramione stories, but we are not that desperate to claim Rose as ours. We know it's Rons. So, there is no need to make fun of us, that we support dramione, with this story. If D/Hr ever got together they would make the perfect kids, not this 'thing' you call Rose.Author's Response: Well I must say the effort to somehow dive into my mind and figure out the plot is quite funny. Truth be told you have the entire plot wrong, but I do give you credit for your imagination. In other terms I do not understand where you are getting this "hate" for Dramione. I love the pairing and one of my favorite stories on here is Lady Malfoy which strictly is Dramione. If it isn't that obvious Rose has always had the feeling that she has never belonged. She does love Ron as a father, but doesn't feel entirely the right connection. And as for changing her personality and appearance I would like to remind you that this is a fanfiction which means I can change whatever I want to. And since you are a big supporter in Dramione, why are you criticizing me changing what JK Rowling put? When obviously Draco and Hermione do not end up in the end. Aren't those fanfictions changing stuff? And Rose is not a "thing" she is a human being.
Thank you for your opinion on my story and sorry that you didn't understand what I was aiming at as a writer. If you have any concerns feel free to inbox me on here.
Awesome story! I wonder if she is adopted, though i am seriously hoping Rose the flower is Draco and hermione's lovechild just draco doesn't know. I can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry the best you can, i'm siriusly hooked:)Author's Response: It will be submitted soon! :) xx Report Review
Another great chapter, keep it up! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I am very new to the whole fanfiction thing, so I have been working at it! :) Report Review
Great chapter! I loved it! Please continue writing because you're really good at it! Please put the next chapter up as soon as you can! I can't wait!
10/10 :)Author's Response: aw thanks! i am working at it! Report Review
Awesome chapter! I love this story so far! Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: thanks! i appreciate it! :) Report Review
Oh I love rose. Feisty:)Author's Response: it is truly a joy writing her all feisty. lol thanks for reviewing! Report Review
If you ae going to have Malfoy be Rose's father you need to add a Draco/Hermione tag so people who don't want to read that ship can avoid it.Author's Response: who said he was going to be the father? lol Report Review
I loved this, it was so new and different from other run of the mill Rose/Scorpius stories!!! 10/10 and get that next chapter up soon! :)Author's Response: it is submitted already! thanks for ur review :) Report Review
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