Aaaw, cuteness! I love George! So lovely!
And bloody damned hillarious the way you described them being drunk!
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!! Report Review
It was really good ! Sweet and fun :) Report Review
“We drinked some Firewhiskey and came back here!”
I laughed so hard at that! Your drunken characters are hilarious, you portrayed them really well- I was giggling the whole time.
The only thing I would say is that I would have liked to see a bit more of Selina's personality. I know you mentioned she was smart and everything, but I'd just like to get to know her better.
The spelling and grammar was good, I didn't notice any glaringly obvious mistakes, so go you! The bit with Fred and George's 'secret code' was a really nice touch, it is SO Fred and George like, I loved it. The ending was very sweet, despite the fact that George was drunk. Really well done.
Great job :D
HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. I did notice Selina's lack of personality, and now that you mention it, I'd like to go back sometime and edit that.
And thank you for liking it so much! C: Report Review
I love this. it made me smile and laugh (:Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. C: Report Review
Heeheehee! I find it so funny when the characters are drunk in fanfics. Heheheh! Ok sorry, I'll stop laughing now and instead tell you how awesomely awesome I'm finding this fic!
I really like it! I know there's only been one chapter bit I really want to read more! Please keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really excited to have such a positive review for my first story. C: Report Review
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