Definetly DracoHermione. this story is awesome!Author's Response: Thank you so much Daniela :)
I'm now keeping it a DracoHermione :)
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I absolutely love it! Hermione and Draco please. I prefer Luna paired with Harry. Somehow it seems to fit better. Your intro promises a good story to come. As an avid reader, I can always tell from the opener if it's worth continuing! You've nailed it, and I'm going on to the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much gran/ger. I am delighted from your review. I do hope to write more for you. Thanks a lot :) Report Review
A Dramoine all the way. Draco and Luna could make sense but it makes more that Hermione would fall for someone she hated. A thin line between love and hate. You have to care about a person to hate them. Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thanks you Sairahi. I look forward to writing more for you. Please stay tuned and hopefully there will be another chapter out soon. :) I am glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
very good story. i loved it and i like draco/hermione better.Author's Response: Thank you very much hermes. I'm glad you reviewed my story.
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Hi there! :)
Aww, what a nice story. This was so enjoyable. It started off brilliantly and quite different from what I was expecting. But I like surprises. :P It was very nice
What a cute house elf! I was glad to see that. Haha too cute.
The conversation with Draco and Hermione was nice. Not really too much tension, and no curse words! So that's good. :P I do believe that everything with the war could make people a little nicer to each other. Definitely.
The flow of this was really nice. Everything went really nicely spaced out with all the actions, descriptions, emotions, and dialogue. There was never too much of something at once. Very nice job!
This was very good and very clever. I am curious to see how it all goes. :)
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House: HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you so much Phoenix_Flame. You response means a lot to me, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it and i hope to bring you more :) Please stay tuned :)
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