omgz! this is like... such a GREAT FRICEN STORY!!! XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D XD :D
omgizzle i cant wait 4 u 2 write the next one!!!Author's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
I'm enjoying this so far, it's interesting to see Snape take a liking to her. I can't wait to see the direction you take with the rest of the story.Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to review this. :) Report Review
good story please continue with itAuthor's Response: Thank you. I hope you'll let me know what you think with the other chapters once I have them on here. Working through a difficult spot right now in the chapter, hope to have it up soon. :) Report Review
Not a bad chapter but you need to get on the HP Wiki or pull out you book to spell names correctly. Slytherin, Gryffindor and McGonagall these are the three I find extremely distracting while reading. Your flow is good but spelling key names, places, items, etc will really drive readers and reviewers way.
I myself have to refer to the wiki and books often as I am not a very good speller. I would suggest editing this chapter to correct the spellings and keep up with the good work with your next chapter.Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling mistakes, I'll go back and correct that stuff later on and I'll try to remember the spellings. Thank you. :) Report Review
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: It's coming!!! I'm suffering from a mild case of writer's block but I'm pushing through it!!! And Thank You!!! I appreciate it. Report Review
I do always enjoy the idea of Snape having a child, especially a girl. I am intrigued with the short beginning, which is my only complaint. I am very interested to see where Snape is leaving his child, they must be a very special couple. The idea of a house elf as a quasi guardian is something I personally have not read especially if you going to keep the poor thing invisible. Oh, I can just see the little thing telling her 'parents' about the elf and them thinking she has an invisible friend.
A very intriguing start and I shall watch out for updates.Author's Response: Thank you for responding to my first chapter. The house elf is not going to be invisible for long, but I am currently rewriting most of the next few chapters so it will be a while before he's reintroduced. Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it. Please let me know what you think about my future chapters. :) Report Review
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