This was an amazing songfic! Really, I loved it! I can't believe I'm your first review, because the fic was so good :D I really loved your portrayal of Astoria. As a character we don't know a lot about, you pretty much have free reign over her, and I think you really made her interesting. From beginning to end, you revealed a lot about her character, but in an interesting way. The song choice for this was just perfect. The lyrics fit th story perfectly, and it didn't seem to be just a retelling of the song. It flowed together, and they complimented each other perfectly. I especially love the descriptions in this. They set the tone for me, and they really made the story what it is. Lovely job! -NaidatheRavenclaw, RavenclawAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me to have your review, and not just because it's the first, but because you described why you liked my songfic. Thanks for reading :) Report Review
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