Awww! I am such a sucker for Tonks/Remus stories. I don’t know what it is about their characters, but I just can’t help but love the both of them. And in this story, you write them both so well. The inner reservations Remus has about loving Tonks were so well laid out and I could feel the tension and the argument in his head. And, of course, the defeat when he realized that he could lose her and she wouldn’t know how he felt. With Tonks, I love that you made her more reserved after the whole incident in the Hospital Wing. You gave her the time to back up and not push Remus into something that he probably wouldn’t have accepted before this moment. And just…you did a really fantastic job with their characters.
I will say I’ve never heard the song before, but I feel you really did weave the lyrics into the story well. The two fit together really nicely and you didn’t overdo putting the lyrics into the story, which was also excellent to see.
My favourite part of the entire story was the ending. I like how it was a silent conversation they had, with Remus admitting those feelings and Tonks accepting them. It just…It seemed to fit in so well with the two of them and really just…it was adorable and sweet and just perfect.
Great job! Loved the story! :D
~GrimmerzAuthor's Response: Hi Grimmerz, thanks for leaving a review, that's very kind of you :) I'm glad you liked this story, and yes, it is a great ship, I love it too. I'm glad you connected so much with everything in this, that's so wonderful to hear and I'm delighted you thought it was real and canon.
The song is a marvellous one by The Eagles, a band popular in the 70-80s I suppose was when they were in their moment, but they still tour and are wonderful, strongly recommend having a listen to the song that inspired this one, its beautiful. Thanks for the review, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Bobby xx Report Review
so sweet! i LOVED it! it's all cute and cuddly yet tense and nervous at the same time! so adorable!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Really appreciate it and very glad you enjoyed this one shot of mine :)
Bobby xx Report Review
Loved it, you used one of my favorite songs ever, and you really got the feeling of the song in your writing. A couple of grammar mistakes but none that took away from the overall story. :) I loved it.Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the lovely review! I'm really sorry about the grammar mistakes lol, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story regardless. I love that song too :-) have a lovely day and thanks again for the review! Bobby x Report Review
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