Great story :D
Sometimes the dialogue is confusing but really it is understandable and I love your story too much for it to prevent me from reading it :D
Update soon. Will be your first reader :D Report Review
that is a good story so far.
I like how Scorpius and Catheline are influenced by the pure blood believes and not all tolerant and so on.
the scene with James was really cool. that was my favourite part. I think it is interesting that you made her a "scary" person.
i hope to read more of the story.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the good words! I'm happy that you enjoy the story, the 3rd chapter is awaiting validation :) Report Review
Hey , I really like your story so far, and I want to read more :)Author's Response: Thank you! The 3rd chapter is coming out soon :) Report Review
Hai, I think this story has so much potential and I'm really looking forward to the rest. One thing Ginny's name is with a G not a J... xDAuthor's Response: Thank you for the good words! :) Report Review
Well done so far, especially if it is not your native language. But just though you should know the name is Ginny, not Jinny. But well done, keep up the good work i look forward to reading more.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll correct that mistake, thank for telling me :) Report Review
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