Very, very sweet. And kinda realistic too. Thankyou, you made my day with this! Report Review
amazing! :D you are a great writer:)Author's Response: Thank you so much dracoxhermione4ever:) Thank you for the comment :) Report Review
hey there. Aw this was such a sweet fic. I loved reading this! The plot flowed really nicely. The scene settings and descriptions were awesome! It wasn't rushed at all and I loved how you wrote the entire thing. Pansy made laugh, haha. I love it when she is written as such an annoying b-well you know what. hehe. The entire scene between Hermione and Draco in the compartment was written really well. Also, I liked that you included a little flashback which gave substance to Draco's 'change'. It was all very well planned-out by you! =) I really enjoyed reading this a lot. The last part was perfect and made me say "aww." The grammar and everything was great too. All in all this was a very sweet and beautiful little story and made a superb read!! Also I loved the significance of "confidence" in your fic. It fit in really well. It was quite thoughtful of you to put it here =) Brilliant writing and amazing flow! great job! 10/10 Cheers! AD ~ end of an era review extravaganza: House cup 2011 Forum Name: AditiDraco95 House: SLYTHERINAuthor's Response: Thank you so much adluvshp ! I have no words to describe how happy i am :) I loved your comment. You have already inspired me. I shall now continue to write and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
I really liked this one-shot and i do hope to see a sequel. It was written well and i think there are some spelling errors. I loved the way Draco talked back to Pansy and i could imagine the way he would say it. Great Work!Author's Response: Thanks! I love your name by the way :) Report Review
I liked the confidence concept in your story. Pay attention to the grammar and spelling mistakes! They can ruin a good story.Author's Response: Thanks TheRandomKimi. I will do a grammar and spell check. Thanks for the comment. :) Report Review
OhmyGOSH! I actually have never thought of it being Draco and Hermione. I've got to admit, I really like them like this. I love Draco! But, I've got to admit, I was dissapointed for Ron too. Becayse, who doesn't love Ron? Maybe he could end up with someone better than Lavender? :/Author's Response: Thanks you so much HarryPotterLover. I will make sure Ron gets someone else better than Lavender next time. Report Review
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