Reading Reviews for This is not Goodbye
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Flouriste Prologue

26th July 2011:
Looks promising! Update soon.

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Review #2, by Victoria LH Prologue

18th July 2011:
A sad but wonderful idea for a story. There are so many places you can take this story. I look forward to more.

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Review #3, by JulyWeasley37 Prologue

18th July 2011:
I loved it! A bit short, but I can manage waiting! :)

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Review #4, by Toarn Prologue

18th July 2011:
Don't listen to whoever that was, the story is great and the perspectives work perfectly. Hope to see an update soon.

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Review #5, by HP reeda Prologue

17th July 2011:
your story sucks, you flick between first and third person and i dont like it

Author's Response: I don't mind constructive criticism, but I don't see any instances in which I switch between first and third person--first and second, maybe, but not first and third. But you're entitled to your opinions, and thank you for your response anyways--I'll take a look and see if I switched between first and third person.

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Review #6, by louisemoses Prologue

17th July 2011:
oh! Keep going! I like it! PLEASEe keep going!!!

10/10

Author's Response: Yaaay you like it! I plan on continuing, look out for an update in roughly a week!

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Review #7, by optimus prime Prologue

17th July 2011:
This was heartbreaking :(
I love it and I want more!

Author's Response: This sounds awful but I'm glad it's heartbreaking--I was going for that (:

Awwwh I'm glad you love it and look out for an update in roughly a week!


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