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Review #1, by Dilys Derwent I Think I'd Like That

12th August 2011:
I liked that. I liked most of all how you wrote James as humourous but taking protecting Sirius so serious (no pun intended :P) and I loved how excitable he was at the beginning. The only line I didn't particularly like was: "There's sunshine and flowers and my mum's cooking and happiness." I liked the bit about James' mum's cooking but I think maybe if you'd put something different instead of sunshine and flowers because at that point he is being serious. Maybe Quidditch and something would have worked a bit better. Overall rather cute... in a manly way of course (It is James and Sirius after all :P) Well done!
Dilys Derwent.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Reviews like this make me SO happy!

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Review #2, by SereneChaos I Think I'd Like That

12th August 2011:
I legitimately laughed out loud at this line: "Maybe, one day, my mum and dad will kill half your family, and the rest will die from shock, and then my mum and dad can adopt you and we can be brothers!"

Hahaha, great job getting James' voice down! Sirius is also well done, and I like the little "humorless BARK of a laugh" used to describe him. I can totally see this situation happening, and I really did just share that line with a friend of mine. Great work!

-SereneChaos, Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! Your review just made my day!

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