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Reading Reviews for The many layers of Biscotti
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by x_weasleyismyking_x Beginning the batter

20th October 2011:
Aww its cute so far ! :)

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Review #2, by Its Obvious Beginning the batter

16th September 2011:
N'aw It's so cute! And Biscotti sounds nice. i want on (stoamach grumble)

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Review #3, by Goldemort (cba to log in lol) Beginning the batter

9th September 2011:
Yay! Romione fluff! Such fun! =)

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Review #4, by leannemariesnape Beginning the batter

2nd September 2011:
Hi! Here with review 2/5! Firstly, I want to say how truly sorry I am for the delay in the reviews! I have no excuse, so feel free to shout at me, or poke me, or whatever XD

This was plain adorable! I loved how Ron related food of all things to their engagement! It is just such a Ron thing to do! haha. Anyway, I loved the interraction between the two of them- still a little hesitant even though they are best friends and soulmates. I think every man must have a little bit of doubt in their mind when they ask the woman they love to marry them, so I think that you tackled the engagement very well. As far as I could tell, there weren't any spelling or grammar mistakes, either, so well done! XD

Leanne

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Review #5, by Dramionie_Child Beginning the batter

28th August 2011:
Heehee :) I love the 'Does food have to come into everything with you Ronald?
Ron said nothing.'
Haha :) Romione... Still not sure...
I think thats the best bit OxO

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Review #6, by potterlover19355 Beginning the batter

27th August 2011:
Pretty good. I really like this and I'll deffinatley favorite this. Just two little things I saw. The first was the fact that Hermione's birthstone is a saphire cuz she was born in September and the second is that they where in the grass lying on Rose's but well... I think that'd get a little thorny. But I suppose that might have something to do with their first kid SO I guess that's not really a problem. Hope to see more soon. :)

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