OH! c'mon, I've seriously waited everyday for almost a year now! And soon I'm dying, just give me something!!! Anything, it could be like a little comment or preferably a new chapter, but at least something so that I know that you are alive, because this neverending non-informative blur I'm living in is just AWFUL. :( buhuh Report Review
First, I loove the story it's just soo amazing! truly! :D But you have to update cuz im getting desperate over here :/! Please not another month to next chapter, i beg you.
Other than that.. How are you? :P Report Review
When are you going to post the next chapter??? lol..i'm trying to satisfy myself by reading the whole story over and over again..lol
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Report Review
YAY! =] New chapter!!
Ahem...anyway =P Brilliant chapter, as always =] I was a little confused at the start because I thought you weren't going to tell us what had happened. Poor Remus, he's all guilty and such..I think it's gone wrong more because their magic is too strong than too weak. They have made it real, and that is something incredible. But as they have discovered it can be dangerous as well =/
Typical Lily to not say who did it like *rolls eyes* I can understand why she's embarrassed but at least she got Avery! It's a good thing Kael came along when he did! Although I'm wondering did Lily like, confund him or something? Because he seemed very confused and from what he saw it would have been very obvious that she was being attacked!!
I really liked the exchange between Lily and Sirius =] I've always imagined that they would be good friends, that Lily would believe in Sirius and help him move away from the shadow of his family =] And that Sirius would help with her confidence issues and be like a big brother to her =]
Haha, James is only conscious a few hours and is in detention already!! I think it's because he found out what happened to Lily and went after the Slytherins but McGonagal stopped him. She probably had to chase him or something which is why she looked so flustered lol. Am I close???
How's your postgrad going?? =] Hope your not too behind on work because of this ;) I hope that you have time to write more soon, I love this story =] Report Review
GUH. Ok first of all this took me a stupidly long time to finally read. Grad school, hate life, etc. But fear not! I'm here now! And this chapter was truly wonderful, totally worth the wait! I think this may actually be my favorite chapter yet! you describe the marauder's relationship and dynamic with/without James so perfectly. And the moment with Sirius and Lily were just... gah. lovely. And I have a feeling that James found out what happened to Lily and um... ruffled some feathers in the Slytherin house haha. As for it being the beginning of something... I'm not entirely sure, but I'll ponder it. Does it have to do with Kael? Because I sense him kind of moving into the picture here and I'm slightly worried that if the marauders take their dreamcatcher back Lily will become interested in him... bleh. Update soon please!!! Report Review
I'm overly giddy right now! I loved that the rescuer of Lily wasn't any womanizer guy (well at least he doesn't seem like that). Also I'd like to slap Lily for lying about the whole thing, but I love it anyway that she did! xD Little ambivalent, I know. Anyway, looove it!
I'm glad to realise that my guesses about the dreamcatcher have been relatively correct, but now I'm drawing blank about what the Marauders actually did wrong there and how are they gonna get it back... Maybe replace it with a copy? :D
With what James did to get the detention, I'm guessing (and pretty much hoping) that he went to a little revenge mission on Lily's behalf and kicked Avery's and Mulciber's and Snape's arses. xD Fingers crossed for that here!
Can't wait for the next chapter, especially when you said that'll be all James! Get it up soon, right? ;D Report Review
This was totally awesome!!! Btw, i think James is in detention coz maybe, he might have found out what happened to Lily and had attacked Avery, Mulciber and Snape. Well, anyway i love it!!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Haha, I guess you'll have to wait and see about that one. :P
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
Wonderful chapter; can't wait for the next! Oh silly James, what have you done now?Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try and have it up as soon as possible. He is silly, isn't he? But lovely. So lovely! Haha thank you. Report Review
Another great chapter, as per usual! Please update soon (:Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am trying my best :) Hopefully it won't be too long! Thanks again. Report Review
This chapter was really good! I'm so glad I found this story again! I accidently deleted it from my favorites list, but I didn't notice until the next day, and for some reason I thought the name of the story was dreamweaver? But then today I was looking through all of my reviews and I found one for this story, and it absolutely made my day! So, yah. I cannot believe the Slytherins attacked Lily! And then Mulciber tried to strangle her! Thank God Kael showed up. You are doing great on this story, and I'm so glad I found it again!Author's Response: Oh dear, I'm glad you found it again too! Haha no, DreamCATCHER. Catcher catcher catcher. Remember, hehe. Thank you so so much. I'm so happy you like it! I'll try and have an update up soon. Thank you! :) Report Review
I loved this chapter so much; I can't wait for the next update! I have a feeling that James is in detention for going after the Slytherins (which is very adorable, by the way).
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: YOU'RE ADORABLE BY THE WAY. No but thank you. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can (hopefully not FOREVER away). Thank you for reading! You're lovely :) Report Review
The Sirius and Lily interaction in this chapter was very moving. Is James in detention for retaliating for Lily's injuries? I have no idea what could be wrong with the dreamcatcher but I look forward to finding out what went wrong. Thanks for the update!Author's Response: I have a soft spot for the Sirius/Lily friendship so I've been waiting a while to initiate it, I suppose. I hope it made sense and that I wrote it well.
Thank you for reading! Report Review
Loved the chapter and a lot of my questions were answered! Actually have quite a lot of love for Sirius, I must say, you've got him spot on. Bit disappointed that it was Kael who saved Lily and not a Marauder, but then again I can see why you did it, would've been far too predictable and anyway is there a possible love triangle looming? I can't wait to hear more from James, especially about his dream, whilst under the sleeping potions. So my suspicion as to why it has gone wrong is not because of the magic (Obviously, it's Remus!), but I think it's to do with how much they love each other and how they are kind of connected, spiritually already? (That's probably way out, but it's a guess!) SO Emmeline and Sirius and Lily and Kael ? LOVE reading this. Have to check daily to see if you've written anymore! Sorry my review is so long...so much to say! Keep typing away, please!Author's Response: Really? I'm always nervous about writing Sirius so thank you very much! Yes, it would have been nice if it was one of the Marauders but it was too... expected. Besides, this is important. There IS a triangle brewing, just... not the sort you might think... he he he...
Sorry to keep you waiting on updates - I'll try and get the next chapter up as soon as possible! Thank you so, so much. And no no, I adore long reviews :) I'm so happy you're liking it! Report Review
Okay. I feel important because i read this efore anyone else. And im weiting the review from my phone, and typing is sorta annoying but you're wirth it
I lava'ed it, i did. And i cant wait for a whole chapter of james my love!! And that other review is more annoying than bad, do you even know the firl??? Anyways. Lava you!! Keep them coming!Author's Response: Patty, this is a mess. Are you drunk? Lava you. Report Review
That was so AMAZING! I won't lie: I've checked on this story like every day for the next chapter, and was definitely not disappointed by this, because it is absolutely amazing!
James was missed, as well as dreamworld, but it was nice to get more information on the dreamcatcher and Sirius, Remus and Peter, as well as the rest of the details of Lily's attack.
Yea, a whole chapter of James :) I can't wait! Good luck on your assignments and all, by the way, I'm sure we all appreciate your sacrifice.
I loved how Sirius apologized to Lily for other purebloods' prejudice, that was sweet :) And I can totally see a friendship potential between Lily and Sirius.
Goodness, I hope Lily will still see all the amazing things about James if she loses the necklace, because I might just have an emotional breakdown if she doesn't. I'd love if she would just go out with him, because that would just be too perfect, but don't let my ideas mess with anything, because you're doing too well on your own, just don't change anything :)
Ooh, I can't wait to read the next chapter!! I am so excited now that you've told what it will be about!
I guess I'm the clueless one, because all the little hints you put in the author's note...I'm not getting anything...guess I'll just have to find out.
This is my all-time favourite fanfiction, just thought I'd let you know...and I have read SO many great fanfictions.
If I haven't said already, I love this story so much! It has to be the best story in the archive, so...ya, it is awesome!Author's Response: I'm so sorry to have kept you waiting! I've been so terrible with updates, but please don't give up on me! They will come, it just may take some time. Sad :(
It was hard to exclude James from this chapter, but I had a looot of information to spill and he sort of got in the way. The next chapter will more than make up for that, I hope!
hehehe they're pretty subtle. I just, this chapter was the beginning of something is all. Something sort of vital to Lily's character/development.
It is? Oh wow, thank you so much! It doesn't deserve the honour, but you're lovely. Your reviews make me smile. Thank you thank you thank you! Report Review
it was almost ze most annoying
though it gets better my dear fleur
laughs and smiles hope it inspires you to write another story not like zis one though LLL (live laugh love)Author's Response: I'm a little confused, but I'm guessing you didn't like it? That's okay, thank you for the feedback anyway. I'm sorry it wasn't your cup of tea. Report Review
I am so excited for the next chapter!! Keep writing. It's so great. Need an update! :)Author's Response: Thank you! You're lovely :) I'm pretty swamped, but I'll get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Hopefully this time it won't take over a month. Thank you so much for reading! Report Review
Really loved reading a chapter from Sirius' point of view. It is interesting getting inside of his head and seeing the emotions he battles with. You did a really great job! Also, I bet MONEY that James is in detention because Marlene, Dorcas, and Mary told him what happened to Lily, and he decided to take matters into his own hands. Can't wait for more!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm never very confident writing Sirius so that means a lot. Hopefully there won't be as long between updates this time! Thanks again! Report Review
Really amazing and beautifully written! Super addictive, I must say! Please, don't bother editing,it's great as it is and I need to read more! I really want Lily to find out about the necklace and fall out with Remus and James too(because she would think he is in on it too.) Then eventually, Remus would talk her round and explain to her that James had no idea and then happily ever after etc. Also, when is she going to find out about James' parents -super frustrating! Wonderful, thanks so much for writing it! Marauders is definitely my favorite era!Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! OH NO YOU'VE GUESSED THE WHOLE STORY I GUESS I'LL HAVE TO ABANDON IT NOW RATS. Hahaha, she'll find out eventually. I have it all planned out - it just needs to build for a while yet. Marauders is my favourite era, too! Thank you so much for reading and I'm so happy you like it! :) Report Review
This story is so cute! This chapter was so intense. At the end, I was literally shaking. Thanks for the cliffhanger, by the way. very nice of you to do. I am not in the least shaking in anticipation to find out who saved Lily. Not at all. ;)Author's Response: Oh thank you! Haha, the next chapter should be up very shortly so you don't have to shake for too much longer :) Report Review
I LOVE IT!! I am desperately waiting for the next chapter!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just submitted the next chapter to the queue so it should be up soon. I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) Report Review
lkjrhujfakosclmvdnhgijfkocxm! WHHHY! I WANT MORE! Why must you torment me this way!?
Seriously, so good. I LOVE this story! And I thimnk I've just kind of figured that the dreams are James'? Like the day dreams were his whilst he was thanking her? But the connection is stronger than that and he could see her as she was, in trouble? Maybe. And Unidentifiable bur? Prongs? Padfoot? Sirius? Some other randommer? I'm hoping for Prongs personally, even though James is unwell. Maybe Pads will be it...or Sirius.amgnbeutifjsvkmnbd! MORE!
Please?Author's Response: jkekrwyfrjhk54r I'm sorry! Please forgive me!
Thank you so much! And thank you for your guesses - I love reading them! Purposefully keeping tight lipped about them though, haha.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I love that you like this :) Report Review
Geez, that was confusing!! But that was so cool to see lily go insane, lol! I think Sirius will be the savior. Or one of the Mauarders. James must have seen what happened and sent one of his friends to help. Or it is something completely different.
What the hell, Severus!!??! I didn't expect him to attack lily, but I can understand why he did it.
Anyways, I really love this story!! Please update soon!!
TheKikGeekAuthor's Response: Hm you'll have to wait and see, haha :) Thank you so much! I am writing as fast as I can and will hopefully have it to you shortly. I'm so happy you still like it! Thank you again! Report Review
OMG pleaseee update soon, I really can't stop readingAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I will update as soon as I can :) Report Review
Yay to updates!! Boo to time delay, but YAY TO UPDATES!!! =D
Another fantastic chapter! What the hell is going on with those dreams??? For them to take over in the middle of her waking hours is so strange! And clearly the Marauders know that that happened considering at one point Lily spotted a grinning Sirius before he disappeared! Explanations would be fantastic!
Lily still doesn't know!!! But I suppose in your defence, this chapter is literally a minute after the last chapter =]
I think it's Sirius or Remus and that James saw that Lily was in danger and couldn't rescue her himself and therefore sent one of them.
I'll be really disappointed if it's someone different and then she starts going out with him and then she'll realise she likes James but by then he'll have a girlfriend and "not like her any more"...I hope you don't do that, you're much more imaginative then that and that's so cliched!
Hopes and dreams...with regards this story I presume you mean, otherwise I'd be here all day =P
Eh, for Lily to be a bit more assertive. I know for the purposes of the story she's a bit of a loner etc, but she is Head Girl for a reason and she bloody well stands up to Voldemort for gods sake! She should have more of a backbone! Now Mulciber is choking her and has taken her wand...so she's defenceless?? What are her legs for?? Knee him where it hurts girl!!! Surely she has nails, scratch his face, stick your fingers in his eyes!!
I'm very for girls fighting back =]
I think your first few chapters are amazing...will you be doing much editing?? Like just rewording stuff or adding a bit/lots in?? Changing stuff?? I'll go reread it obviously, just wanna know if I'll be in for any major surprises??
Since you're doing all the editing, does that mean the next new chapter won't be for ages?? ='(
PS. I think this is the longest review I've ever written...feel special =PAuthor's Response: Hehehe, explanations will come... eventually. Actually, you find out a fair bit in the next chapter, so you have that to look forward to!
Don't worry, I'm definitely not doing that storyline. Actually, this is leading into something that people have been waiting on for a while... but more on that later.
Don't worry, Lily will grow, I promise!
Oh no, not adding a lot, just yeah... grammatical stuff and structure. It shouldn't be too long. Life has been hectic (school has just gone back) but I should have the next chapter up soon!
YES LONG REVIEWS YOU SHOULD DO THEM EVERY TIME.
Thank you so much! You're the best! Report Review
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