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Review #1, by parashar_harry Andromeda

11th November 2011:
its a good story .
i liked it. it is moving very fast.

one thing that occurred in my mind and it also surprised me a little that u didn't mention sirius anywhere in the whole story.
u mentioned his brother but no sirius how come?

don't u think that both andromeda and sirius were a little similar character as both have same view .

u have portrayed her as she didn't like a single member of her family but sirius was also there so both would be a good friend as they have same opinion about pureblood . thats why i thought that there should be few line about him also in this chapter. i hope u understand what i want to say

but its completely ur story and i am sorry if u didn't like my review .

overall its well written . i completely enjoyed it.
PS- sorry i am very curious person but can u now justify that how she ended up in slytherin as u have portrayed her she must not be in slytherin.

10/10

waiting for next chapter ^_^

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Review #2, by rogovjm Andromeda

3rd November 2011:
I love your story and your banner too. How did you make your banner? Is there a website that showed you how? If there is can I see the link?

Author's Response: Glad you like the story. I made the banner on photoshop - I sort of made it up as I went along.

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Review #3, by parashar_harry Bellatrix

28th October 2011:
its good chapter . u have written very well but one thing was confusing why she came back to black manor . u have started this story as she has come for some purpose but in the end it was nothing.

if there is no any particular reason then " u can also write it as she was sitting in lestrange manor and is recalling her past"

its my opinion about this story sorry if u didn't like my review , i have reviewed what i felt
9/10

Author's Response: That's a good point, I can't believe I didn't notice it before. I don't think Bellatrix has a specific purpose; she is visiting her childhood home for the first time in years and going through memories for the sake of it. If I get time I'll shove a line about her purpose in there somewhere. Thank you for your review! :)

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Review #4, by Person Bellatrix

13th August 2011:
You really captured the character. Please write more. I always like this kind of story.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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