Oh wow! This is a very good song fic! Normally I don't tend to read them as they are either too close to the song or there isn't enough text between the lyrics which sometimes is very hard to read.

There is a good balance here though I did think you could have expanded on their story a little bit more here as it was similar to the song, not a bad thing however I would have liked to know a little bit more about their relationship developing. The relationship however did appear to be very strong and unbreakable and that fits in very well with the song.

I did like this fic well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I'll keep it in mind next time I read over this story. Thank you for the review!

~Sara

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I really enjoyed this! Taylor Swift is one of my favourite artists anyway which made me want to read this even more!

All the way through I felt you kept inkeeping with the song and the meaning of its lyrics. All the way through though I kept thinking this was Scorpius and Rose all over but then looking at the character list it said Other Canon so I was confused but I definitely think this slips into the ScoRose kind of category!

I liked how you made them stay away from each other for nearly a year! It gave time for the love to intensify, for the guy to work on her dad even though she believed he hadn't wanted to see her.

It was super sweet well done

Author's Response: Thank you! I made it so you would have to guess who it was (though most people are guessing ScoRose) , it could be anybody really.

Yeah, I love Taylor Swift. She's my idol :D

~Sara

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ScoRose. This screamed ScoRose to me! Quite honestly, I think of ScoRose whenever I hear this song!
This was a great, fluffy one shot! I think you did a great job of capturing the mood of the song. It really is an emotional roller coaster, and you portrayed that in your writing. I loved how sweet and simple the beginning was, going to sad in the middle, and then light and sweet again at the end!
Now if I am right, and this is Scorpius/Rose, I have to comment on Ron. I just can't see him doing some of those things. I would definitely see him being angry with her, but I don't think he'd go as far as to stopping her from leaving the house when she was of age. And if he did, Hermione or Harry would definitely step in.
Other than that, it was a lovely songfic!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'm not sure if Ron would really act like that...but it fit with the song. So..yeah xD Thanks for the review!

~Sara

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Happy Gryffindor Monday!!
Seeing I really like this song I just had to read this little piece but if I were you I should try to get a banner for this story most people don’t read stories without a banner, you know. I liked the fact there weren’t any names in this little piece of you but in my head it was Sorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley.
Cleopatra ( Slytherin)

Author's Response: xD Thank you! Yeah, I've been attempting to make one, but I think I should just request one :/.

Anyway, that's probably who I had in mind when I wrote this :) It seems to fit them most, doesn't it? Thanks for the review!

~Sara

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This is really cool. I liked it partially because there aren't any names in it, yet it doesn't seem weird (sometimes it's weird just reading he and she, but this worked well), and partially because there isn't any dialogue in it at all. This piece is very sweet, very touching. You can really feel the main character's (whoever she may be) feelings through out the entire thing. I love this song, and now I love this story! You're really good writer, you know that?
-Katherine045/Slyterin

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! Yeah, I thought the one-worded dialouge was a nice touch :) Am I really? Thank you so much!

~Sara

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It's not too difficult to guess... ScoRose? Anyway, I thought it was well done, the strange, awkward sort of teenage angst was perfectly described and the characters where believable. You might want to make the paragraphs a little more descriptive though, not necessairly about the characters, since you obviously wanted to keep that a little faded, but maybe the emotions, and events, because it sounds a little rushed. I loved the way you ended the fic. I seriously felt the joy, delight and suprise that the main character (Rose?) felt. So that was mastered.

All in all, a very good fanfic. And i really liked it! :D 9/10

~LunarLuna of Slytherin

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I defintely had Rose and Scorpy in mind when I was writing this~ but I allow it to be anyone. Though, they do seem to be the only canon characters that fit...

Thanks for the advice! I'm glad you feel the angst was good-I am a teenager, but I've never been in love. Or had my heart broken...or even been in a relationship. So to hear that you think it was perfectly described made me happy. Thank you so much! As for being rushed...that's a culprit in many of my stories. I need to work on that :) Thank you!

~Sara

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I really liked how you wrote it. It had a lot of story between the lyrics, which is always good. I also liked how you never said who the characters were; In my mind they were Rose and Scorpius. Great Job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, those were the characters I had in mind, but I decided to leave it up to interpretaion :)

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