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Review #1, by xelha horse Notice

18th July 2012:
Enjoyed this a lot, but you should totally write a bit more to develop the story some! Or maybe write a sequel to explain how James did get Lily. Great writing, all in all!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on a sequel at the moment, so hopefully I'll have that up soon :)
Thanks for reading! :)


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Review #2, by Opalpixiechick Notice

18th June 2012:
Awww. I love this. You did a great job. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Review #3, by Nutty Notice

27th September 2011:
aww, sweet :) really short though, I think you could probably expand more on it - you should develop a whole story built around this one - i like it a lot :) I like how you've written from James' perspective - you don't often see the relationship displayed like that :) as usual, love your writing :D

Nutty
x

Author's Response: Was maybe thinking of expanding it, will have a think... :) As always, thanks for reading! x

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Review #4, by MadamePuddifoot Notice

21st July 2011:
I really liked this! You showed a different side to James and it was well written. . . Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by jameslily1313 who can't sign in for some reason Notice

21st July 2011:
I think it's really good! Short and simple, but it gives a good flavor to his determination. It had a good mix of background, present times, and looking forward in it. It helped give the story its momentum. 10/10! I'd fave it if I could sign in...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it and that the story worked out!

Thanks for reading! x


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