That was a nice first chapter! I liked your concept and plot. I think you showed a nice atmosphere for your theme too. Still, there are few mistakes, like- you wrote Pravati once. It's Parvati. It was just a small mistake but i thought I should point it out. Don't mind. nice story, I am True Author from Bronze vs Blue review battle! =]Author's Response: I'm a horrible speller, I'll fix that. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. Report Review
Tease of a chapter my dear! Harry and Fred?Different. Ron and Draco, i've read maybe one fic with them paired. I can see Hermione and George surprisingly enough. Please continue! Report Review
I will forgive you for ignoring the Deathly Hallows ONLY because this is awesome. 9/10 Report Review
This is a really good story begging, I can't wait to read the rest of it, if there are more chapters coming..Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more chapters as the story is completed. Report Review
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