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Review #1, by hpfanno1 Rumours, Raised Eyebrows and Stink Bombs

16th April 2014:
heyyy, there!! long time no see! i was surprised to see another update... how'd i miss it? anyway, i'd thought you'd given up on this story or something, so it was nice to see.
anyway, like before, this is another increasingly adorable chapter and it's fun to see sirius in denial and mira trying to cover up her growing feelings.
keep it up and update soon, yeah? ^^
loyally,
fanna

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Review #2, by hpfanno1 Lying to an Ex-Girlfriend

18th March 2012:
awww..
it's fun to see pads getting all worked up about his feelings towards miranda..
and i bet she made herself a cosy spot in his heart by taking the blame for her...
:)
i can't wait to read more of sirius's views on this last incident in the next chapter...
so, update soon!
loyally,
fanna

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Review #3, by hpfanno1 When Paintings Give Advise

10th March 2012:
about bloody time!
i've been checking this story page everyday since i first started reading it and i'm glad you finally moved your butt and updated it..
i was starting to get impatient!
anyway. the solution was so obvious that i was surprised they didn't work it out themselves...
and poor mr.knight!
they used and dumped him like a bunch of slytherins..
hmmmfft!
the chapter was sorta filler-ish but i know it takes some gillers to get the story going..
i misses pads and miranda though.. (i mean the feelings stuff)
update soon!
loyally,
fanna

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Review #4, by jplove4evs Agreements & Tutoring

29th January 2012:
haha I love sirius. typical that he would go into the dorms just to give her something. aw and he doesn't want the boys to know. too cute ahha 10/10 per usual

Author's Response: thanks! boys and their ego...:D

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Review #5, by hpfanno1 Agreements & Tutoring

23rd January 2012:
I LUVVIT!
as usuall, i love your piece of absolute amazingness!
but i've noticed that as the story progressed, you've stopped showing siruis's feelings..
please show his feelings more.. i'm dying to hear his train of thought...

Author's Response: Grati! Ok so right now there are some major points I have to iron out in the story, like i said first story, so there are bound to be mistakes. Anyways so thats why the chapters are more third person pov rather than first person. I love writing in miranda and sirius's perspective, but its limiting in some ways. That being said, I will definitely try to put in more Sirius moments in my next chapters:) Thanks again for reviewing!

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Review #6, by hpfanno1 By the Lake

23rd January 2012:
yup, there's one thing miranda couldn't really do and that was fooling around-- and now, thanx to padfoot, she's even doing that!
i disagree with her, though.
sirius is a great influence!
did i mention that i loved this story?
ah well,
in love with this piece if epicness,
me

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Review #7, by hpfanno1 Hanging with the Marauders

23rd January 2012:
oohhh! full moon, is it?
is that where they're going?
oh, well i guess i probably won't be getting an answer for that triller anyway..
i'll just go on to reading the next chapter like a lost puppy..
*sniff sniff*
did i mention i can be over dramatic sometimes?
*massive grin*
me!

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Review #8, by hpfanno1 Apologies and Confessions

23rd January 2012:
man, your quite accomplished at legimens!
you knw wxactly what a reader want's!
ooohh...things are getting interesting! :D
loving miranda more and more as each chapter passes!
totally addicted,
me!

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Review #9, by hpfanno1 Miranda Skips for the Second Time

23rd January 2012:
oh, so sirius is finally starting to under stand her more and things are clearing out now.. well, i'll just be hoping things go that way..

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Review #10, by hpfanno1 Miranda Skips for the Very First Time

23rd January 2012:
oh, so i guess they're even now.. aren't they..
it's good that you made her miss a tution class as well or else she would have looked like some miss goody two shoes when compared to sirius.
and suriusly, that's just plaing wrong..
so, great chapter!
i'm gonna be reading on..
see ya..
when i next review..

me.

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Review #11, by hpfanno1 Angry Miranda Cter vs. Angry Sirius Black Round 1

23rd January 2012:
ooh! miranda, puch the effing ego out of the bloody dog-star.
it's like they say.. the strongest kings of love often start off as feuds..
i'm just hoping that that's what's gonna be happening over here...
well.. toodles!
sincerely,
me

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Review #12, by hpfanno1 A Hundred Percent

23rd January 2012:
awww loving the miranda- james friendship...
i have a feeling that lucy and miranda are gonna get really close together, over the passage of time...
ohh.. there's another chapter...
well, i'm off!
yours,
me

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Review #13, by hpfanno1 Eavesdropping, Snorts, & Plans

23rd January 2012:
ah! the moment!
when reality finally get's through the thick heads of the guys and they finally realize that torturing a girl is not the best way to get her on a date with you...
and good to see that she get's under sirius's skin as much as he does to her...
this chapter surely promises sirius and miranda's getting close together..
well... off to the next chapter..
your super-glued reader,
me

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Review #14, by hpfanno1 Fashionably Late

23rd January 2012:
yup, i was right.
major pain in the arse.
well, i guess that's padfoot for me! :D
that was quite an outburst from socially-awkward miranda!
i didn't see that one coming!
well, i guess siruis had it coming at him... somebody was bound to refuse to take his shit and shout the truth at him... and what makes it even more fun is that it's a girl he doesn't really know and now he can't take his mind off her...
well, i'll stop here, cause as you probably know by now.. it's hard to stop me once i start off...
anyway... it's hard to review at all when i'm dying to read the next chapter... but i do want you to get feedback and more readers.. so well, i guess it's worth it.. :)
loyally stuck with a permanent sticking charm,
me!

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Review #15, by hpfanno1 Fashionably Late

23rd January 2012:
yup, i was right.
major pain in the arse.
well, i guess that's padfoot for me! :D
that was quite an outburst from socially-awkward miranda!
i didn't see that one coming!
well, i guess siruis had it coming at him... somebody was bound to refuse to take his shit and shout the truth at him... and what makes it even more fun is that it's a girl he doesn't really know and now he can't take his mind off her...
well, i'll stop here, cause as you probably know by now.. it's hard to stop me once i start off...
anyway... it's hard to review at all when i'm dying to read the next chapter... but i do want you to get feedback and more readers.. so well, i guess it's worth it.. :)
loyally stuck with a permanent sticking charm,
me!

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Review #16, by hpfanno1 Grr! Tutoring…

23rd January 2012:
oooh.. someone's turning out to be quite a smarty pants..
*wink wink*
and the tutoring lessons...
well, i'm betting that sirius is gonna be one pain in the arse..atleast in the begining...
well, lemme just read on and find out! :D

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Review #17, by hpfanno1 Beginning

23rd January 2012:
man, you think one review is exciting? then you sure don't know me! :D
i am VERY dedicated to the stories i like and i never let the writer feel as if they lack reviews or anything- 'cause i'm always there for 'em..
and guess what?
you r officially in THE LIST!
so be warned... you are gonna have mighty reviews to answer!
mwahahahaaa!
well, moving on to reviewing the story... well, the concept is not what you can call entirely original, but you write in such a fun way that it still makes to get glued to the screen.. :)
i'm already liking miranda... she's very similar to my personality.. and of course, i love sirius in every shape and form which is why i speciallize in reviewing sirius/OC stories.
so far, th story's very attracting and the banner's nice (credit's to whoever made it, it's catchy.. :P)..
one question, though..
are you indian?
it's just that i happened to see the running-and-train-catching scene in an indian show my best friend loves (she's paki, so she can understand it) called "kitni mohabat hai"..
i dunno... it was just freaky similar, so i asked...
well, don't worry i'm not a racist and i hope you're not one either..
ok, now i'm just plaing blabbering, so i'd better stop or i'd go on for ever..
anyway..
your's loyally..
uh.. me! ;D

Author's Response: haha, i am definitely excited to have such an avid reviewer:D that was actually my first ever review since this is my first ever story, so i was suuuper happy that day. I just wanted to say thanks so much! I kinda based Miranda on me too! oh and i will pass along the praise of the banner...to me! haha i made my own banner, partly cuz i didn't know how to get someone else to make one for me. I am neither indian nor racist, but i do have a best friends who's pakistani. I thought it related more to this movie i saw with her um, Dilwani Dulhani Leja Ingay or something:)

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Review #18, by loony_lovegood101 Hanging with the Marauders

27th October 2011:
:D hey, i really like this story.very funny :D and yay! they're FRIENDS!!! *happy face* keep being awesome

lOony

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #19, by MaraudersMischief Apologies and Confessions

9th October 2011:
Oh, how this story always brightens up my day n.n
Even on rainy days.
Loved it, like always :D

Author's Response: haha:) Thanks!

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Review #20, by AaheliBlack Apologies and Confessions

6th October 2011:
I like it! Miranda is pretty cool. Update soon!
I'm sorry for this very shitty and completely unhelpful review. My brain is dead. I'll come up with something better next time, promise!

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks all the same:)

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Review #21, by Shybutsecretlyinsane Angry Miranda Cter vs. Angry Sirius Black Round 1

22nd August 2011:
Well, I think Black is being a total git.
Miranda's jus trying to help!

I would like to read more of this soon! :)

Author's Response: haha. Yea. He's being pretty annoying. He's just not used to getting away with everything at school. Miranda'll teach him. :)

I have a few more chapters written. As soon as they validate them, they'll be up!


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Review #22, by LunaLovegoodwillRockForever  A Hundred Percent

20th August 2011:
This is a very cute story!

Author's Response: Thank you:)

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Review #23, by MaraudersMischief Eavesdropping, Snorts, & Plans

19th August 2011:
This is really a cute, funny story. I like it.
Can't wait for next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was going for. I was looking for a light-hearted story to read, and decided what the hey, I should just write one!

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Review #24, by Kiera <3 Beginning

1st August 2011:
Love it(: Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I gotta say, getting a review is exciting:D

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