Aww. Great chapter.

I feel Percy's worry for his sister, and you got that across perfectly. We really managed to feel how he felt and everything. It was wonderfully written. Of course Percy was acting a little withdrawn. I would have been too.

Uh oh! What a cliff hanger to end the chapter with! Now I'm very worried for Percy. I hope everything is all right.

Great chapter!

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Awww. I completely feel for Penelope. I would be scared too!

Recovering from the nearly world hostile take over of a man like Voldemort is tough, and I can completely understand where she's coming from.

Great chapter. I loved the Percy/Penelope bonding time.

Really awesome! :)

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Aww! A happy note to end the chapter with.

Another wonderful addition. It's coming along so nicely and making a great fic.

I love your characterization of Percy. You write him very well, and I feel like he is just the way JKR made him.

This is turning out very nicely. Again, you're writing is lovely. There is a perfect balance between everything. There is never too much of one. It's all brilliant.

Wonderful job! :)

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Hello there!

Wow! This is such an interesting and original piece.

You know, I had never really thought about what made Percy return to the "right" side of things and such, and I had never read a fic about it either. But I'm glad I found this.

This was such an interesting story and a curious and clever take on things! I am really looking forward to where you take this.

It was so nicely done. I could feel the emotion in everything; everything was so moving.

Great job!

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