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Review #1, by Godrics_Helm

2nd August 2011:

Nice story, but you could have used more descriptions to give the story more emotion. Three years isn't really that much of a gap between ages, and Albus only received his Apparition license when he was twenty or so? Must have been a slow learner

Author's Response: yeah i know what you mean, it seems to be lacking in something. I will try and find some time and emotion to flood it with.
thanks for the review and the points you have said.

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Review #2, by KittyLuna

The Other Child

1st August 2011:

This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for doing justice to such a hard subject. My best friend lost her daughter before we could know her and see her beautiful face but we think of her when ever something reminds us of her. I can't imagine how it will be for my friend when she has another child, hopefully to term, and explain Melly to them but I loved this story. Thank you darling and keep writing.

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it, i have wanted to write something like this for a while.

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Review #3, by MaiWishes

The Other Child

1st August 2011:

Gideon Remus is a nice name :)

Author's Response: thanks, i played around with other names for a while but then I remembered Ginny's uncles...I thought it was appropriated really.

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