& Then Boom, I read this story.
Hi there ^.^ I'm friendly don't worry, I can't leave nasty words ^.^
I don't kow if your ont the forum but if you are you may of been by my reviews offred page, get this I hate Teddy/Victorie, yet lately over the course of these past few days Teddy has grown on me.
I quite liked this fluffy little one shot :) I thought it was very mischevous and cheeky ^.^ Teddy really does know how top get the ladies doens't he? Blue hair? Pray tell why does Tedyd have Blue hair? O.o That scred me a litte >.<
-"I never told you, did I?"
"I like you."
I thought this little statement here between the pair was really creative, but Can I maybe suggest something ^.^ Feel free to throw it in the trash.
You did an excellent job of going back and explaining things, so we weren't left in the dark, but I wuld of liked a little more feeling and depth from the characters. But that's just my persona choice. !! it's still a agreat story..
Forum Name: MyMyMiss
House: Slytherin.Author's Response: Uh, hi :)
Yeah I am on the forum but I've not been on your page.
Teddy's a metamorphmagus, and in the Deathly Hallows he was described as having blue hair in a picture Lupin showed Harry.
I don't know what you mean by 'feel free to throw it in the trash'...?
Well thanks nevertheless, I appreciate your advice and praise. :) Report Review
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