You have the right to hit me. How long has it been since the end of the Rewrite a HP Scene Challenge, and I'm only giving out the prizes now. Sorry :( This is my first of 3 reviews by the way :)Well, this was really good! I love how you changed the meaning of the song for something else, it was meant to be about a breakup revenge, but instead you turned it into revenge because of what Bellatrix did to the family. I thought that it was very well written, and you could tell that it was Augusta who was talking. Overall, really good! Love Livvy xxxAuthor's Response: *Hits*
Just kidding, no problem!
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This is a really well written one-shot, and I think that you gave an excellent view into Augusta's mind. I really liked also how the past and present mixed into one, almost seamlessly. I also really like the idea of Minerva looking after Neville- I just have an image in my mind of her, sat there in her tartan nightgown cuddling baby Neville! ^.^ Anyway... I also think that you used the song very well- who knew that a Taylor Swift challenge could produce something like this?!
(Oh, and your banner isn't too bad, either ;) )
Leanne :)Author's Response: You flatter me! I've never written anything about Augusta, so this was pretty fun to write.
Yeah... The banner's alright I guess... :)
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I liked how you connected the story with the song. This idea was something that I wasn't expecting at all, but I still enjoyed it. Good Job! :)Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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