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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by weasleygirl11

The letter.

8th August 2011:

I like this story. Really interesting idea you had about the letter. Will definitely keep reading!

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Review #2, by Little Miss Potter

The letter.

8th August 2011:

My names is Harlene Rainfield. I write novels for adult readers in Britain. I am pleased to say that your story shows promise and you, as a writer, show great potential. I would be pleased to publish this story for you when it is completed. Harlene

Author's Response: OMG, thanks,i had a really bad review, but i guess ill show him :)

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Review #3, by Ginneh

The letter.

7th August 2011:

gotta love weasley scandles of love

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Review #4, by maskedmuggle

The letter.

6th August 2011:

Awh, I really loved this story! The plot of this is really interesting - having Fred write a letter in case he dies. And I really loved Hermione having to choose between Fred or Ron. I loved the last line, seeing Ron really admitting that he loves Hermione!

There are a few grammar errors and some could be better worded, maybe get a beta? But overall, I liked the plot, I liked the characterisation and I liked the story.

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

Author's Response: thanks, it's my first fanfiction and im happy with how it turned out, ill try and better the grammar. thanks! xx

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