Are you kidding me? This is amazing! This is probably one of the best things you have ever written. It's so vivid! And the banner compliments the story completely.
Like seriously, I can see this style of writing really taking of for you. This is awesome Tia.
Amazing, just amazing.
10/10 doesnt even begin to cover it.Author's Response: Thank you!! This is even better coming from you, because you are such an amazinf writer, and could probably nail this ten times better than I did.
I feel like I need to leave a super long nice review on my favorite story of yours, to make up for it.
xxx Tia Report Review
I feel that if I'd ever find someone like this guy I'd chain him to the wall if that'd be what it took to keep him ^^
You have great talent, treasure and nurture it ^^
SarahAuthor's Response: He does seem kind of perfect, doesn't he? Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means alot to me (:
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This is so freaking beautiful. Gah, I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you (: Report Review
OMG!!! This is so good...I love every word of it! You are an incredible writer.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked this (: Report Review
WOW! This is an incredible read. I love your use of simile and metaphor. Your descriptions of the surrondings and feelings are some of the best I have read.
I also like the fact you get a hint of the characters but that it could be any one.
On a technical note I saw one spelling mistake the word "lye" should be "lie". Other than that, brilliant!
Thank you for the story.
I look forward to more of your work.Author's Response: What a kind review, I'm so happy you liked this! And I'll fix that spelling mistake, thanks for pointing it out (:
Thanks again for this review, it made me smile. Report Review
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